| Reviews for State of Being |
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   Wisdom's Shadow chapter 1 . 2/6/2010 Amazing story. A very insightful look on Aang and Katara |
| The Dreaming Moon chapter 1 . 9/5/2009 That's fucking awesome. You sort of know what's going, but not to who or what or how or why. Not sure if i want to know. It's amazing like this. |
| HeyItsMJ chapter 1 . 1/13/2009 You have a beautiful style. This was very intriguing! |
| Fireflower1315 chapter 1 . 6/26/2008 Very nice, keep on writing. |
| satinsilversnowflake chapter 1 . 6/4/2008 Wow, this is amazing. The descriptions are perfect, and really help the reader empathize with the emotion (or lack thereof)of the moment. I also liked how your constant references to a white light contrast against the darkness of the piece itself. Great job! Seriously, amazing job! (I especially like the part about hope and the very end when it says, "The screaming stopped." Hit a chord, for some reason.) |
| prettygirl17 chapter 1 . 5/31/2008 Freaky. But... wow. |
| Wolfen Dreams chapter 1 . 4/22/2008 This is Aang going into the Avatar State isn't it? Somehow, despite that I'm certainly not the hope of the world or crazy magical super-powered guy, and just a random girl with a computer and way too much time to think, I feel strangely empathic towards the emotions in this piece. I think anything further I could say on this piece would be more confusing than it is, so I'll just part with a few words that come to mind: Fascinating, confusing, clever, clear, incredible, and insightful. |
| nutshak chapter 1 . 3/16/2008 this got me thinking. good job. |
| nephertiri chapter 1 . 3/15/2008 Wow. Sounds like what Aang would be thinking in the Avatar State. Good job. ;) |
| Ardala91 chapter 1 . 3/15/2008 I think I got the idea behind it. Very dark, but extremely beautiful. You're words really have a rhyme to it like poetry! |
| PetertheChameleon chapter 1 . 3/15/2008 I think I can't agree more with some of the other reviews. Beautifully tragic. Simply stunning, and so emotional. I don't think it's confusing at all, or at least it shouldn't be. It's quite clear exactly what it meant, and what isn't stated is exactly what gives it such an impact. Amazing job! |
| JESUSFREAK-And-Proud-Of-It chapter 1 . 3/15/2008 Beautiful. Wonderful emotional appeal and word choice...I am captivated! |
| KnightRayne25 chapter 1 . 3/15/2008 that's dark, I liked it. |
| Shuisha chapter 1 . 3/15/2008 Wow, an interesting idea, but I cannot agree with the idea behind it. I don't believe killing everyone is the only way to save the world... I really hope the show doesn't end like this. |
| klainelynch chapter 1 . 1/27/2008 Really well written, I love the 2nd person POV. |
