Okay, that definitely ended in a cliff hanger and a second chapter is definitely needed

very nice little baby fic :)

I love how he fights against his feelings. ...just give in Darcy :)

This and Just A Touch are great! Wonderfully written. You can really feel their anxiety and confusion over feelings that are new and unexplainable to them. These would be great as an expanded story.

Well, the contents of this story were the exact opposite of its title. :)

This was so well written. I really like how you had it that Darcy could not refer to Elizabeth as "Miss Bennet" even in his own thoughts, a sign of how lost he really is.

Poor Darcy! NOT! Ha ha! He'll give in soon enough! :)

This sounded like it had come from his own head! I think that you did a very fine job of defining his feelings.

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I loved this story and its companion piece. Are you still writing fanfic? You've great style! I wish you would continue these two pieces. Why not make a full-fledged story out of this? I really like your take on both Darcy and Lizzy. You get their voices just right.

sighhh... beautiful.) Yourz style, its easy to follow while being so beautiful. Thanks for the wonderful read, and do keep writing Pride and Prejudice fics!

No, no, no. DON'T LEAVE IT LIKE THAT. NO.

again, very cool. i have such a way with words dont i? so encouraging... note the heavy sarcasm. sorry i dont have more 2 say, its all in my head but it iznt coming out. ahh well. D.

I really enjoyed both this story and its companion. Thank you for sharing!

I really must insist that you continue! Your vignettes are so wonderfully descriptive and intense that they just beg to be part of a larger story. I suspect that any choppiness that exists in your pieces may be at least in part due to the nature of vignettes. I feel certain that they would be smoothed out in a more fleshed out piece. And as for Ms. Aidan's work, though enjoyable, I did not find them as good as many of my fellow readers seem to. They ended up being just a bit too much in the romantic vein for my taste. I like this somewhat darker take on the conflicting and confusing feelings both are experiencing. I also really enjoyed the banter between them and our insight into Elizabeth's mind during their exchange. Her thoughts came across as very realistic for a young woman of certain age and experience. It shows how she has both the immaturity that allows her to create and maintain a mistaken impression, and the strength of mind and character that will later allow her to rectify her error. If I were to suggest any improvement I might request a little more elucidation of Darcy's concerns regarding his feelings. Why he feels they are wrong or ungentlemanly. Why he has to try and fight them. Although, I have also enjoyed your description of how this feeling differs from other lusts or infatuations that he has experienced. More on that would be helpful as well. Pray, continue!

Your little "one shots" have my heart aching and breath taken away because they are so beautifully done. I love your writing style, the way you structure his thoughts. DAH. My heart/mind goes mushy because it's so ...stirring. THE STIRRING OF FEELINGS. Ohoho. Loved it. I do hope that you'll write another story of them. :] And I will definately be keeping an eye out!

I liked very much how you wrote Darcy's POV, very well expressed, well done again

I think u did a great job in portraying darcy's thoughts. I can see him tossing and turning over the encounter. Keep it up!