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I've read a few of your works and this is rather good. Still miss the Encyclopedia though, that was a marvel.

You are the best writer of fictional anime I have ever read a story from. Continue the great fucking work my dude. Biggest fan from now on.

Im going to be honest, This was really good and really enjoyable to read, sad to see some idiots complain like some small children because of your own paraing choice, and the fact most of them hid their name like coward if they don’t like them they should leave, it’s your storie.
Good luck

when let Naruto made some bases about the lands like the whirlpool and sand and west parts of the sand like the city slaves a city made to selling slaves and others for warriors and slaves in caves ,when he get the one time black and red clows and hats too , one time in the sound vaillge Naruto bund it down and took out the founder his right hand men and others in it too, now the sound vaillge is now house the Shinigami shadows and his own office now,

J'aime beaucoup surpris par le groupe hana anko kiminaro mais intéressant.

Great another cringe Hinata and Naruto story just like all your other stories.
Why are there barely any good stories that’s NOT a Hinata paring I absolutely hate it because Hinata is a terrible love interest especially in your stories since naruto wants to kill everyone who wronged him and then there’s Hinata who tells him a few words and completely changes his view, terribly written

This was very good I loved it and my brother Tyler loved this as well until next time

Another gem

when sir it is about time for the Akatsuki get 1 has Naruto war with the was up to them now , but were is the team living in now i will like to keep a old inn as a home 2 floor home were Zabuza had a bed room and his partner in his and Naruto and his 2 in her bed room , when the Shinigami Shadows had took out a evil vaillge in the land of waves took out the top men and others too, then keep gold and others things like books to scrolls and old art too , were the salve grils 4 to 9 was keep with them to working in the home now, were the guys warriors was kill off too , and old swords and others things now on the wall now , in the Shinigami Shadows troy room / meeting room , were the others was offices need to keep too , were in his big office Naruto keep his art of now kill off warriors and armys too as will the sound vaillge too , were a skull of one men Naruto put in a lights into it now,

Your pairings make absolutely no fucking sense. Please fuck off and get buggered you little fuckface Mcgee

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So they are basically going to give their bloodlines to Konahoa?

Why would they leave Itachi alive and not 'allowed' to have children? Shouldn't they have neutered him instead? Danzo can easily have someone take Itachi's sperm and secretly impregnate multiple females in secret...?

"when he told the hokage.. she wasn't exactly thrilled", Um, what exactly did she expect? And how can she blame either jir or naruto? She's the one that sent the toad to KILL HIM! ALL SHE'S GOTTA DO IS STAND UP to a bunch of WEAKLINGS! (I mean seriously what's the POINT of the position, if she can't ACTUALLY do anything?), So now they're gonna take out their anger on people that LIKE naruto and she ISN'T GONNA DEFEND THEM either? What the heck kinda leader/protector is she? Even the incompetent third was better. And AGAIN who CARES who knows? They ALREADY ORDERED the execution and she folded like a cheap lawn chair, so, it was ALREADY going to happen, who cares if he's cared about or hated when he's killed? Either one is a VERY STUPID comfort if they DO NOTHING to help him! AGAIN, I am not too sure what she is "crying over spilled milk" over, SHE BROUGHT IT ALL ON! The council caused it, but she was weak enough to be bossed around, and then jiryiya too? This story REMAINS confusing. And why would his "friends" want him back to die? That's another "huh"?