Yay this is great :) x

I liked it better in the beginning, without all the gang stuff. That got pretty confusing pretty fast. And I don't think you had them have smex, did you? And I would have liked to hear more about the twins' relationship.

Night Roxas, you sadistic bitch. :D lmfao

uwahhhhh, this was cute and sad and happy/cute in the end! :D i felt bad for sora's mom bein a homophobe...

HOMOPHOBIC PEOPLE SUCK :D

at least, in my opinion they do~

Aw! I loved it! It was kind of an abrupt ending, and you did skip over a lot of fine details, but you put in what was most important - closure.

Man, my heart nearly leapt out of my chest when Riku was reliving Sora getting stabbed. This would've been a scathing review had you killed Sora :P. But the way Riku just quickly thought about it, and wasn't like in pieces grieving, I knew there was a catch.

Well done

-S*O

aww kawaii ending.

this reminds me of Loveless.

lol rlly cute...btw have u ever heard of Our Kingdom.

this story reminds me of that manga! ]

AW! I'm sad that it's done, but i have to say, it was a great story!

Riku needs to let of a bit.

woah? hmm does Riku actually have a reason behind it or is he just a pervert haha.

Yeah, it was a sudden ending...but still sweet :)

Thank ya for finishing it!

I really like this story :) Keep it goin...please?

please update As soon as possible, I love this story! D

Pretty good...

A few grammer mistakes but that's it!

Keep it up!

-Blood&Ashes-