Nice and simple, and very well written! I like the kinda-sorta-almost character study with Fuery, and even though the characters were different from canon, they all stayed pretty well within their base characteristics. Overall, very nicely done!

I like it! :)

I really enjoy the feel; it very much has that 'war story' feel to it, where the soldiers are sitting and talking. But it's very natural, not forced or contrived.

And I love the dialog! You capture the characters really well.

Haha... That's such a nice little drabble-fic. It really puts your reader in a happy, fuzzy place. It's either that, or I'm just a sucker for all the military-bonding stories floating around. There's something about the what your wrote that that makes it so incredibly believable and... Happy.

Keep writing it up! (Go Fuery!)

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I don't see anything wrong with it. It's rather nice. Makes me want to watch FMA again (this time paying more attention to the military). There's a few line breaks in the middle of a line or two but I think that's just formatting?

That's pretty interesting. Edward's hiding stuff, isn't he?