Finally reached the end. It's sad that this story is left unfinished, but I hold hope that you'll complete your work someday.

Again, fantastic chapter. Plenty of callbacks to previous seasons that could very well fit in the continuity of this story. It would be interesting if that girl was Sora or a manifestation of her, being the once partner of garudamon and all... Still, I enjoy reading the original things, plus the plausible explanations you come up with.

Haha, Ryudamon thinking that Dorumon's story was a lie. Can't wait till she digivolves into Ooryumon and gets turned into Ooryuken for Alphamon to use

Loved the chapter, but I thought the council scene didn't completely capture the essence of the Mega digimon you described so intricately last chapter. It is acceptable as is though. Also, loved the fertiliser and poo concept.

I feel really sad when I find great fics that ended on hiatus 9 years ago... Two chapters in and I like it a lot. Because of you I started shipping Dorumon and Ryudamon. The politics and social structure of this story is fascinating as well. I really hope someone adopts this story and continues where you left off, or I'll do it myself!

what's the song and what's with the "pet"? Is she supposed to be his salve or something? be you could review my Taming the Frontiers?

references recognized, Toy Sotry and Pirates of the Carribean the Curse of the Black Pearl

LOL! crazyeight is a good friend of mine.

Renamon wants BEtamon? GO GET HER BETAMON! She's strong she's hot and she is smart, 10 out of 10!

Whoaa, its pretty cool. I bet Taichi is Yggdrasil. My two cents. Say, I myself write the fic about Magnamon in X-Evo. But it is more of his pov. Do you mind if I use some of ur ideas? Believe me, this is the most believake story ever.

I can't help but think, how can Dorumon be given custody of Tokomon? I mean Dorumon is like a child himself. Champions normally being like adults but some cases the ultimate form is like an adult. You even had the Roachmon reffer to him as "kid".

Are you basing the Digitamamon and Floramon's merchandise on what food they made in Digimon Adventure and Digimon Frontier? The Veemon X's noodles (is that a refference that Veemon helped Davis run a noodle cart?). I am sure the Burgermon making burgers is no coincidence. With the 4 Great Dragons, they weren't really an order. To say, just because they were grouped together doesn't mean they worked together. I mean Azulongmon's loyalty was to the Harmonious Ones. Goldramon and Magnadramon probably worked together but Megidramon was the personification of the Digital Hazzard itself and was a force that threatened to destroy the digital world rather than promise to protect it. You do realise that the three terminals (Urd, Verdandi and Skuld)are not just three different areas of different terrain but different realms of time not just space. Yes, it's true that WarrioressGreymon is most likely a fanmade digimon but VictoryGreymon is official and he has appeared in Digimon Next as the Mea form of the leader (who is the protypical goggle head)'s digimon Agumon. So you make the remaining Olympus 12 members the holders of the highest authority. They are more suitable as rulers than the Knights whose job is to protect but not rule. So will the other Megas still form a council of representatives with power and influence? Back with the Olympus 12, Minvervamon is named after Minerva which is the roman equivalent of Athena who was the Greek Goddess of wisdom, so therefore shouldn't she be made the highest single authority of the megas you are using for this story. So even though Gaiomon is suspicious in his own right, even he thinks Murmuxmon to be duplicitous in his actions.

When you listed the Megas you currently have in the story. Are you including Magnamon because he is at least an ultimate but could be a Mega. Sorry, there is no WarrioressGreymon, not officialy. If you made her up, just say so. I would imagine Gaiomon to be a rebel, more of an anarchist. However Murmuxmon (A Demon Lord), a choosen! But then again, Yggdrasil did create an army of DexDorugreymon and used DexDorugoramon and later Dexmon as his personal protector. You spelled Murmuxmonas "Murmexmon" the second time. It's Verdandi. So Neweniac is a city. Is there going to be any relation of ENIAC and YGGDRASIL? Another thing about digimon and gender, isn't Ryudamon a MALE digimon?

"Digital Space", is that the official name for that area or did you just decide to call it that? When you use the curses invovlving the Harmonious Ones, one of them "Baihumon it", how is that similar to Damn it. You do realise that the Harmonious Ones are not present in the world of X Evolution. It's only Yggdrasil and the Royal Knights (They are the only Digimon organisation at all shown in X Evolution). That's being satirical. That one Digitamamon was a buisnessman. So the legendary leader of the Royal Knights became a farm boy. Saying that Dorumon is Alphamon in rookie form.

Gaioumon, yay. (happy dance). He's my favorite. I like your choices for the council. As for your last statement, I'd have to agree, I mean the only female in the X-Evolution movie was Blossomon, yuck! Anyway, good chapter!

I love your swear phrases! And Magnamon is just F**king awesome! I'm going to have to keep track of this story