That was incredible! Goodness, you had me crying! I've always thought that Lucy and Edmund would be the closest, being the youngest, so I love stories where they're best friends!

This is really nice. I was crying through the first three parts of it. Brilliant, may I say. You see very few authors who put so much detail and emphasis on their stories like you do. This is going to my favorites.

Aw, I love this story. Very few authors are as good as you, you actually were able to help me feel the emotions that the characters were feeling as I read it. I love it!

Aww. I like how Edmund is the protective older brother. His relationship with Lucy is very sweet.

The one thing that seemed strange to me was that no one seemed very surprised to see Edmund alive. They were very happy, obviously, but no one even asked him how he came back to life.

Still, it was a very nice story, and I admire you for spending all day working on it.

This is pretty good. I especially like the ending. Good job Lucy, you tell him. Three cheers for you for no nasty incest or that sort of stuff.

O my, I love it!

We see so much Peter-Edmund stuff (not that I don't love it personally) that sometimes the girls get overlooked - so glad you did this!

Such a nice job - wonderful! I love it!

-KCS