Reviews for His Return
hpsupernaturalfan chapter 1 . 7/21/2017
Really enjoyed this. If Jo have had them kiss before when she did, I think this would have been a good spot for it to happen. Even though they admitted they loved each other, and wanted to be together they knew that right now they couldn't do much about their relationship other than minor affections toward each other. For one Harry is there so not much privacy, but also they are in the middle of a war mission to stop Voldemort.
GingerPygmy99 chapter 1 . 5/31/2011
omg added to my fav list - lol "No i mean i feel the same wa u great prat" lmfao ! x
Vinyaya chapter 1 . 10/5/2008
Much as I LOVED insanely sarcastic Hermione who beat up young Ronald and punished him good for his stupidity in leaving her even though she called after him, this is a pretty decent alternative to JK's version. And I can't give ya any higher praise than that!
lilbratty74 chapter 1 . 8/16/2008
omg so cute I so wish that's how it really happened!
Your Valensi chapter 1 . 7/6/2008
such a sweet one shot, and i definitely prefer this to hermione beating the crap out of ron

:D
ToQuinnWithLove chapter 1 . 6/10/2008
wow. that was such an amazing story. simply beatuiful.
winged-soldiar chapter 1 . 3/21/2008
OMG! (Gosh not god, don't say his name in vain! ha jk)

I love this story!

It was like my heart swelled right when Hermione's did! The books themselfs couldn't do that!

I love you for writing this!

Loveyouss!-mee.
jaree09 chapter 1 . 2/10/2008
Loved it! And yes, that IS what I wanted to happen when Ron came back. I loved your description of their kiss. Very romantic.
Rebakah chapter 1 . 2/8/2008
What a story! All I can say is wow and keep writing!
ChocoholicBec chapter 1 . 2/7/2008
Aw! This is so adorable! Silly Hermione, being all cross with him.
DanuMarie chapter 1 . 2/6/2008
Oh! That was so sweet. Good job! _ (And you're right - that -is- what I wanted to happen when I read that part. I was really mad that it didn't too. I think I even called 'Mione a bitch _)
Sugarquill824 chapter 1 . 2/6/2008
This was a great story. Amazing, actually. I couldn't stop myself from clicking on this story... and I'm glad that I did. You captured the emotions perfectly in a moment that I only wish could have happened in the book. Hermione's reaction was appropriate, of course, but far too quick in DH, and we didn't get to see when she and Ron fully talked things through.

Aww, he's so sweet, Ron is! I just love it. Going in my favorites now.
MaNdErS20100 chapter 1 . 2/5/2008
loved it!

i wish Ron and Hermione would have gotten more than just a middle-of-the-war snog. this story was brilliant!

great job!
CrystalDragon791 chapter 1 . 2/5/2008
Well, I admit that was sweet and well-written, but I definitely prefer the original. Hermione just isn't Hermione without the feisty-ness.
hll13 chapter 1 . 2/5/2008
aww, how sweet :)
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