Reviews for The Love That Dare Not Speak Its Name |
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![]() ![]() ![]() i do not know but i am hot and crying and it is not a pleasent combination... thankyou for your work! |
![]() ![]() you're just perfect writing narusasu sexual tension. the dialogue, their little movements - the attraction is crazy. english isnt your first language but you write better than 95% of native english speakers. bravo. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awe it's so sweet! I love it! _ |
![]() ![]() ![]() ah. unrequited love. this is kinda sad at the same time so sweet. and truly breathtakingly beautiful.. so I'm now actually reading your fic and i started from here. and what do you know, amazingly written as always. thank you for sharing this. . .:) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice but when some one is talking you would put this EX-Yeah, yeah, he replies. When it should be this: "Yeah, yeah", he need To add quotation when someone talks or just like people need to use commas. |
![]() ![]() ![]() One of the better incest stories I've read! I love your writing style. It feels more personal, like a journal that belongs to Sasuke, when you don't quote what people say. Love it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Man this story reminds me of my relationship to my brother( except the sexual part) im like naruto and sasukes my big bro.i like how you made me remember that even to this day we still have each other as brother and sister. i love this chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() haha, that was interesting! /3 |
![]() ![]() Not many try writing in the I-form it's really brave of you to try! It does not sound natural to 100 per cent. But kudos for trying something new! The added incest provided extra angst and the smut was well donne! Keep on writing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really enjoyed reading this story. For some reason it fills me with joy and sadness at the same time. I want to cry and smile through the tears. I loved it. You did an awesome job. Pagan |
![]() ![]() ![]() Umm... incest is also something I don't mind, I understand it and I know people feel guilty, but they just don't care. It's a precious secret between siblings and they love the fact they have something no one else does. I like this because it's good, so fricking good. |
![]() ![]() ![]() awe...that was so sweet and kute! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Again WOW! great story also, I love your writing style the way there are no quotaions it's quite unique. I just can't stop reading. |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was a beautiful incest story... Love the angst! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, I love this story. The end was awesome (can't read angsty fics with angsty endings lol thank goodness for your existence hehe) - it was happy and calm at the same time. Beautiful. Love this. |