Goddammit. Now you made me wanna cry.

Aww T_T so sad!

omg! tat was so touching!this is a great story

*sniff sniff*

plz write some more like this in the future

Waah!

That was so ANGSTY! I know that that was the genre but it didn't make it any nicer. I'm sad now.

But I did like this. I don't know that much about Dragon but I don't think that he's a heartless creep and this portrayed him how I'd like him to be portrayed

Nice work.

XxStrawberryKittyxX

i nearly cried reading this write more stuff like this please

Oh! That was sad! *sniffle* Trying to come up with anything about what happened with Dragon to have him leave Luffy and Ace in Fuchia is tough. Then again, we don't even know if a mother (or other parental figure) was there. I'm stopping myself here before I start to ramble. Good job! *thunbs up*

Bluhu!

That was the noise I made while reading this. I'll have to say I liked this little story quite a bit! It showed a more human side of the worst criminal known as Dragon, and how the parting from his sons might have happened. Good job!