Reviews for Livewire
ShifterGilgamesh2181 chapter 6 . 2/23
This was amazing and I cant wait for the next chapter
look2019 chapter 6 . 2/5
Good Chapter!
Ivarr chapter 6 . 4/22/2019
I really wish I New the rest of the story.
Moonlight Fang47 chapter 1 . 5/6/2018
Please continue the story I love it I hope haku and naruto support one another become a beautiful couple
Red Renegade 777 chapter 6 . 11/28/2016
You let such a wonderful idea lay forgotten... such a waste. You made a competent team, you've added an original mystery for Naruto, and a pretty unique skill set for each (though I'm still wondering about Sasuke...). I'll follow on fumes of hope, but I don't think I'll be seeing an update in my gmail anytime soon...
volrath77 chapter 6 . 11/17/2015
This is a good story. Interesting original idea. Why is it not continued?
Guest chapter 2 . 7/6/2015
He's obviously the reincarnation of dan, tsunade's lover from when she was young. I figured that out at the end of chapter one after thinking about it. He died with her trying to heal him yelling at him to stay alive.

Chapter two confirmed it when the moon cast light down and changed his hair silver. Another hint is that he is proficient with a weapon that went out of common use after the third shinobi war meaning he died during or before it.

Therefore he is Dan, Shizune's uncle and Tsunade's love.
jcampbellohten chapter 6 . 3/23/2015
So, he sent his memories or soul back in time when he was dying. Who's the girl, and were you planning on her ever being found again?
Mega Latios 1988 chapter 6 . 12/22/2014
This story was written in a way I had only seen once or twice before. It is unfortunate that you decided to discontinue this. And it was getting really interesting too. Oh well that is your choice and I will not judge you for it. Peace
GreenAlien123 chapter 6 . 11/2/2014
Great stuff! A shame you discontinued this story.
Guest chapter 1 . 8/19/2014
Holy fuck, naruto might be dan reincarnated
Shadowprice chapter 6 . 5/22/2014
this is amazing you should make more
Xcaliber chapter 6 . 3/10/2014
Great story sad to see that it'll probably never be complete but a good read nonetheless
ougley chapter 6 . 9/9/2013
thanks :)
Jman12394 chapter 6 . 5/27/2013
Evil evil evil.

Really awsome story, really good style of writing and annoying that its been several years since last update.
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