This was a perfectly beautiful story. The world needs so much more Hotaru/Chibiusa in it. Thanks for providing this for our reading pleasure.

This is a fantastic story. I love Hotaru/ChibiUsa so much, and this was perfect for them.

Beautiful story!

As always these Kisses fics are just too adorable. I am relieved to have found such wonderfully sappy stories.

*myaaaaa!* . So SWEET! I love the starting, and I most definitely loved the ending! Good interweaving of the actual facts from Sailor Moon to suit your story's needs, it left me with a satisfied feeling to read this.

((PS: And you're right, it DOES make me kinda want to cry, but in a good way. ))

It was beautiful

Saturn,

Cry! Very nice. I love this part (“She is mine Setsuna. I will be the first other than our Queen to hold her.” The other women behind me drew in surprised gasps at my declaration and the underlying command in my deepened voice.)

I thought that was very cool. I can't read more on this kiss thing your doing. Love it!

(Doing a happy dance!)

That was very romantic and sweet. Always loved these two together and you did them justice.

Wow, I haven't read Chibiusa/Hotaru in YEARS! Reading this fic, I'm suddenly sad that I long ago stopped writing this pairing. Your fic was very sad and beautiful and it makes me want to write some new Chibiusa/Hotaru. :D Thanks for such a great fic!

wow, for such fluff, I really really enjoyed it! (this coming from an -unsurprisingly- fluff fanatic) I've always loved this pairing, they're so unique! YOu very much captured the feel of them, or at least my idea of hotaru/chibiusa

First off, the long " I am" list made me kind of worry if I will sit through that. I kinda just picked the, for me, interesting looking storys from your profil, and since the first two were very well written, I figured I'll just have to get over myself and read it.

massive lulz Ami, Michiru and Setsuna in the "I am" list. so true, so true. But i'm like Michiru there

All in all, I'm not a big fan of the style the story is written in, past and first person, but disregarding that, it's good. I don't like it as much as the Fuu/Olette thing of the Kisses series, but it's still good.

A little critique, even if the steady repeating of "I am" looks good, it does get really old for the reader. I tend to skip after the second line the first couple words, simply expecting "I am", and I had to go back and re-read the first line to make sure i didn't miss something. Three read, two more go to.

That was so sweet! I loved it

I really liked this story! Very sweet, very poetic; it has a nice feel to it that kept me captivated and reading...even through my Biology professor's lecture!

AW! XD

That was so cute, I MIGHT actually be dead right now. I'm not sure.

Loved it.