Omg I love Obito sooooo much! Jajaja and the brothers all sound scary in a teddy bear kinda way!

Ugghh that Orochimaru is so disgusting. Omg but I love Sasu and Naru as parents!

Omg how precious are Naru and Sasus babies!

Omg Obito sounds soo friggen badass and cute at the same time lol

Omg this is beyond beautiful

lots of applau

Fantastic work. Love this Story.

Interesting Story:)
Love Madara as yakuzza Boss...would so Love to see him find a Partner...Maybe as a crossover Story...like with Harry... Or viewfiner or yellow;)

I hate that Sasuke got pressured and guilt-tripped into adopting children. I hate that he immediately rolled over and did whatever Naruto wanted. Not everyone wants to be a parent. There are plenty of people who choose never to have children. Naruto had never talked to Sasuke about the possibility of having kids and then he suddenly sprung it on him that he wanted to adopt twins. WTF. Who does that?

And then, instead of taking Sasuke's feelings seriously about why he's hesitant to become a father, Itachi basically dismisses all of Sasuke's concerns. Immediately afterward, Sasuke goes running to Shizune to ask about taking the kids. All in the same night. Does anyone really think Sasuke got over his fears in only a couple of hours? Itachi's mediocre advice radically changed his perspective?

In the end when Sasuke went running to Shizune, it only looked like he was doing it to please Naruto and because Itachi had guilt-tripped him into it. There was nothing Saske said or did that makes me think he himself likes the idea of raising a child. You can't be so cavalier about adopting kids. If it doesn't work out, you can't just take them back to the store. I'm sure everything will be fine in the end since this is sappy fanfiction and there's no way to show true love in this type of fic without BABIES, but still. If this was real life, everything that's happened so far would be a recipe for disaster. Naruto started beating the shit out of Sasuke because he saw him carrying a box and thought it means he was leaving him. That's messed up and definitely NOT normal. These are the type of people who should be adopting?

And an excellent job it was.

amazing story.. perfect ending.

Love it still! So so awesome!

I really enjoyed reading this, sasuke reminded me of Dr Cox's from Scrubs and I absolutely loved the proposal

This story was written so well...loved it...

Amazing fanfic!
It was sooooooo good,I loved it and it was very your hard work going.
I loved this fanfic ~