| Reviews for Crystal's Heroic Journey |
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   pixette chapter 3 . 9/15/2009 I love the detail that Chikorita is sitting on a mat. You follow the gameplay very well, which is extremely pleasing to me. I know some other people who love game-based fics too. Moving along nicely, again. I can't wait to see what happens next! PS. While my own story takes place in Johto, it's the total opposite of yours. Good job on the story so far! |
| pixette chapter 2 . 9/15/2009 This is good. The action is moving along very nicely. I like that you're so succinct; every word has meaning and sets the story further ahead. Just so you know, I read each chapter in a few minutes. I read something like 100 pages an hour, so I'm gonna review. A lot. I found your story on Female Trainers or what that community is called. What strikes me is that while some people might make the case for a Mary Sue (everything goes right, falls into place, and she saves the day and everyone loves her), I find this story believable so far. Except...you know...for the Pokémon. |
| pixette chapter 1 . 9/15/2009 This sounds great! I can't wait to read the next chapters. I've got a few hours. What struck me about this story is that you've only got a half-dozen reviews, but you have 14 chapters. It's awesome that you kept going. Look for my reviews! I'm so excited to read this. I get really nostalgic about Johto fics. The thing that stood out about this was how quickly everything moved along. There was so much action in this story, but all presented in a quick-paced and exciting package. Well done! |
| Blaze-Lover chapter 4 . 9/4/2009 Crystal likes Gold huh? Even their Pokemon giggled at them! |
| Blaze-Lover chapter 3 . 9/4/2009 Like the Crystal version, the only differencess is Gold appearing. |
| Blaze-Lover chapter 1 . 9/4/2009 Cool story. I'll keep readng it. But if I were in your place, I would choose Cyndaquil. |
| ebony chapter 12 . 5/12/2009 update plz! its hard finding good stories D |
| winslow chapter 7 . 2/16/2009 a |
| KlonoaDreams chapter 11 . 2/1/2009 Soon isn't enough, when are you going to update, this fan fiction is the best I had read and on my faves. |
| FMAGreedsgirl chapter 11 . 10/20/2008 I LOVE your stories! I hope you update soon on this and The Distant Past story! _ |
| Lovrina chapter 11 . 6/12/2008 This story is getting good. Just work on the grammer a little bit, and it'll be great. Keep up the good work. |
| TEC The Evil Critique chapter 6 . 5/23/2008 You know Gold starts out with a freaking Cyndiquil right? And there are so many grammer and punctuation mitake, I lost count. Delete, then work on it more. And, form all that is Pokemon, pick a better title. God. Siggy! I am a flamer. So beware. Mwuhahaha...Munches on a carrot...Takes out a colt...BAM BAM BAM! MWUHAHAHA! DIE AUTHOR! MWUHAHAHA! |
| TheMasterer chapter 3 . 3/13/2008 wow...i could just play the game instead of reading this. BE MORE CREATIVE. i see you expanding on it, but only slightly, you could do more. i understand using the game for ideas or a start, but come on |
| SS-lover06 chapter 8 . 3/9/2008 Really a good cliff hanger. Haha, so is it going to improve Silver's and Crystal's relationship together? |
| Lovrina chapter 2 . 3/8/2008 That was extremely good. |
