| Reviews for Fate's Mistake |
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   X.pix.X chapter 3 . 7/4 That was an anticlimactic death but it was still amazing, absolutely loved this story |
| Chessmasteroftheuniverse chapter 2 . 6/22 Well wouldn’t this put an angry lobster in Voldemort’s britches when his attempt to restore a body with potters blood is subverted by that accident. No abduction for you! This is a really cute and awesome story. Poor hagrid though. |
| Hadami chapter 3 . 6/15 Harry and Ginny's relationship is well done. The writing overall is great. I don't like how Harry never talks about his time with the Dursleys or anything else in his past; he just tells Ginny she couldn't know his name for safety reasons. I think it would've been cool to have Harry come to grips with his past with Ginny's help. |
| DeadFish37 chapter 3 . 3/31 Generally pretty good. I have a couple of gripes though. Firstly, in the books Malfoy is mending the vanishing cabinet to bring about Dumbledore's death, and as a punishment for his father's mistakes. Neither seems to apply here, so why? Secondly, the final battle just seemed too easy - I can't believe someone of Voldemort's stature would allow himself to be unsighted in that way |
| AvidReader2425 chapter 2 . 1/15 Definitely a fun read |
| hufflepuffiesten chapter 3 . 1/10 What an interesting AU story. I enjoy stories of Harry and Ginny being friends, best friends, in their younger years. |
| Guest chapter 3 . 11/3/2019 I read a !it of Harry Potter fan fiction and this story told all the important points without making it stringing it into boring great job! |
| Zile0 chapter 3 . 10/10/2019 Beautiful! |
| Silverstory101 chapter 3 . 7/28/2019 Awwwww️ |
| qwerty19 chapter 3 . 5/22/2019 This was really good. I like how everything turned out happy, though part of me wishes there was a scene where Harry somehow found out about his childhood. Too many angst fanfics, I guess. I think the way you ended it with Fate was a fantastic end to the story. Great job! |
| qwerty19 chapter 1 . 5/22/2019 This is great. I like how you portray all the characters. |
| peggy77 chapter 3 . 4/30/2019 Such a wonderful story! I loved it. 3 |
| Amandalee1988 chapter 3 . 4/5/2019 This story was awesome. The chapters felt a little long. Other than that though I enjoyed the story immensely. |
| mumphie chapter 3 . 3/20/2019 A very good story, though the beginning was a tad hard to read (dark, sad, heart wrenching). But, a smile was had at the end! I know this is over a decade old, but you could, if inspired, flesh it out a bit and make a longer story. I would have liked to see how Harry dealt with Lockhart and how he was in some of his classes. Although. I can understand keeping it just as it is... |
| Corwyn chapter 3 . 3/18/2019 A lovely story! Thanks for sharing it with us. |
