That was adorable. A lot of atmosphere. Sometimes that's almost as good is actual romance or even better. You did good. Really good )

The subtleness was appreciated. Interesting change from your usual style. Well done!

Haha i love how may got a lot in common with ash Lol

Remember the user name, Gaurdian125. I'm making it my personal mission to review any and all kinds of aspiring Advanceshipping stories. Anyway, back to the review. I'am always interested in one-shots like these with their own unique little flare going on. This one was cute, fluffy and very shippy, and I always enjoy reading and reviewing, interesting one-shots as these. U can PM me if u feel the need to answer me on this, but I think it's weird that REALLY GOOD writers make the best one-shots, but good long chapter stories? Don't hate on me about that, but it is a trend that I have been reading and seeing lately, and I was just curious to know if you see it as well? And anyone still commenting should PM me and give me their opinion as well, cause I WANT TO KNOW!

Uh er ah um is this a ones shot cause me like this and it would be great if it wasn't a one shot more like a continuous thing uh era hmmm grr anyways. Hmpf oh screw it! Lalalalallalalal... Um sorry just some of my inner randomness leaking out. :P

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this is just the reason why i love advshipping one-shots. they r so sweet and cute.

super cool nice story!

its cute!

Super cool! It was yet another fantastic oneshot.

Yeap, They are more than friends...Least I hope so o.O

Great story! You described everything perfectly. Not too much and not too little. And May bravely started to confess her feelings...Well little bit a least Telling that they are more than friends is great start thought.

Whole idea was fantastic. Can't get sleep at cold night and end falling to sleep other people shoulder Cute. When we are talking about Ash and May, of course. ;)

Simple yet enjoyable. The restless night is always a good way for them to strike up a conversation. And they were right, the list of similarities could go on for quite a while.

Great job with the ending too. Not a confession but it is the fact that they are talking of things like that that a relationship could start from.

Short and sweet. Very nice QTpie. Can't wait to read your next one, keep 'em coming!

That was so cute.