:D

Wow, Gaara, just get straight to the point! Lol XD

Cute cute

I really enjoyed this story. I think the characters were well-written; Naruto's friendliness and willingness to help a stranger is very believable, and Gaara's straightforwardness and social awkwardness are very Gaara-like.

At first, I thought it was Naruto Gaara was interested in, but it turned out he was only interested in the bike, which was funny. He was quick to preposition Naruto, though, which was even funnier. I can imagine he would be curious about sex and simply ask for it even if he was a virgin. Naruto took it pretty well, and I really did enjoy the ending. I'm curious to see how their relationship works out, but since this is marked as complete, I'll just be left to wonder about it. Overall, very enjoyable read, and please continue writing!

:D SO CUte !

It felt a little fast-paced but still very adorable. Gaara's forwardness about sex made me burst into giggles, and I loved the question about the date at the end.

"Do you want to see my room?"

My FAVORITE line. (: So adorable. I can't get over how perfectly well you manage to depict these two. It's amazing, and simply addicting.

I don't think I found a single mistake in the whole thing. Not that I was even looking for any to begin with, since your writing is just so.. AWESOME. o.0 haha I love how you portray Gaara. He is beyond adorable. He's, like.. I dunno. I just know I love him. xD

As for the smut, I loved it. Obviously, it was one of my favorite scenes; especially since you wrote it with overflowing passion and sentimentality. These two just belong to one another. omg I still can't get over this.. I really do wish there was more to it. D; wah~

I leave with reminding you that this was truly unforgettable, and simply lovely. Hope you stick around for a long while! I'm officially a fan of your work. (:

xx

Now THIS was a hot story!

I liked how you had the two of them interacting. Very well done :)

This was really good.

You're awesome. Great job on your fics! Could you continue Reflections of Us, please?

That was soooo sexy! ...and the title is perfect.

Fav phrase: electric bliss.

sweet! i loved it!

That was good! NaruGaa forever!

Really awesome!

I love your writing style