Omg. Your writing is so freaking amazing! I'm dying with curiosity... AND YOUR BYAKUYA is so in character it is just so perfect. I LOVE THIS STORY SO MUCH _

loved this chapter & the story to were it heading

Gud read.

YOU WRITE SOOOOO WELL! THIS IS THE BEST FAN FICTION I HAVE EVER READ! AMAZING AND EXACTLY LIKE BYAKUYA! EVERY CHARACTER WAS PERFECT! I JUST SIMPLY LOVE IT! YOU TRULY ARE AN AMAZING WRITER!

This was a very good story! Kazumi was a great character with a very interesting backstory. This last chapter with their children was absolutely adorable. Great story! XOXO

I love you. This is what I've been looking for all this time D:

Well... Character indicators usually do mean- well- what I mean to- hm... Well, it's a bit misleading, isn't it?

This shouldn't even be labeled as Byakuya and Rukia it has almost nothing to do with each other. It's not like I hate Kasumi but I was expecting Rukia.

I really liked the story. It wasn't too long (just to bore you to death) and it was written really well. By the way, there was something there about Nemu and Urahara, wasn't there?

An EXCELLENT story!

Hi there! I really loved this story and Kazumi has a special place in my list of favorite stories. Your writing appealed to the imagination and was a breath of fresh air, kudos to you. I especially loved Byakuya with the kids! 3 Byakuya wondering where Ichiru got his wild side was endearing.

I know that you probably think the flamers are hilarious, they are, actually, but I still think that some people should not press the review button. That makes them sound like idiots, spelling and grammar mistakes, cursing, and whatnot. Ignoring them is apparently the best way to deal with these people. Ignorance is acceptable but rudeness should be intolerable.

Anyway, amazing story and sorry for my ramble -'

It took me awhile to realise.. THIS IS NOT A BYARUKI FANFIC! I was jealous and infuriated that this Kazumi person was not rejected by Byakuya and RUKIA, she wasn't really involved in the stories! Argh..

a story of byakuya whit a slut that trying to get in his pants.

Becuz byaoc is not popular you put this story under byaruki section to gain more reader, damn bitch!

This fic should not be in this section, you totally misplaced it.

Yeah Rukia is in the fic and play large enough role, but not large enough to be a main character. The main character are byakuya and your oc which play the LARGE role and not Rukia! She's definitely not the second main character.

It really make my eyes hurt to see this fic in this section, and if you have some respect to all Byaruki-fans please move this fic to the right place. Seriously are you trying to be funny, make a joke by put this fic in this section? It's really like a big mock for all byaruki-fans.

PLEASE MOVE THIS FIC TO THE RIGHT SECTION!

memoria