Wow. That was truly incredible. The feeling of sadness, even as Harry 'remembers' a happy moment is profound. Good job.

Woah! Holy crap she writes Harry Potter too! *faints* Squee! This was awesome as per usual! I hope more is to follow...*hungry look* This was blrilliant! The descriptions are amazing and beautiful (of course) and I especially enjoyed the description of James putting up the tree! XD Simple hilarious! And the ending was painfully perfect too, how the boxes fell down and everything. A wonderful, poignant, sharp, and detailed but short and sweet story that's deeper than deep. Just what I expect from you! Excellent work!

Love, love, love!

this is great! uve captured the feeling of loss and put it into good words. well done!

keep writing,

saz