no he wasen't she was on her hands and knees begging for forgiveness right in front of the person who would kill her

still, it would be nice for you to finish this story

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You have a point but Naruto just dealt with a non canon situation so why would he forgive THAT easily? She should be dead for what she did.

I loved the first chapter a lot. I stumbled across this when I was looking for a story similar too it. Can anybody help me find it? Naruto is puppet from the waist down and almost all of his arms and neck are puppet too. I can't remember the name of it, and its driving me insane! But I like the beginning of this and hope it continues to get better.

ok xD

i say keep the story. personally i'm hoping he doesn't fully forgive her and let's her prove herself. but please keep going i love this story and really wanna see it continued.

when are you going to rewrite this

Kunoichi and Shinobi are singular AND plural. Just wanted to let you know.

after the attack, why would Naruto be loyal to Konoha? they crippled him... and with all the crap going on, he'd probably requst to leave the damn village...

but sometyhing this tramatic should change him completly, plus knowing that his mom and sis abandoned him (couldn't they have just died instead) and his dad damned him and all, he should be changed... I mean, sure, in canon Naruto was forgiving and all, but all people did was really glare at him... the younger generation meant the boy no harm and only knew about how Naruto had no skills... so this Naruto shouldn't be so forgiving, thats probably some sorta disease or something...

ok

yeah i agree.

I dislike being blamed for $hit i didn't not do.

Good Luck

WTF, no-one I mean no-one would ever forgive that easily considering the last time he saw her she was hacking his limbs off. He would either try and kill her or run, he wouldn't even forgive Minato yet he forgives her. Dude seriously it eould take months of begging from Kurenai before he even listened to her.

I love the idea, I would love to hear more of it. in my opinion it was an enjoyable read.