Oh my god the characters are seriously unlikeable. The beginning is good and strong and very intriguing. When alice came in the picture it became annoying. I know that bella deserves to properly say her goodbyes to her family but given the choice of changing her to save her life thereby canceling the wedding and then guilting and manipulating edward and bella just to have the perfect wedding that she planned is crazy and petty and it is really lucky that this fic is short that i was able to finish it. I was ready to drop it by chapter 9. Then bella decided to side with alice and save the wedding that she didnt even want in the first place is ridiculous. She should have given more consideration on her condition's impact to edward's guilt. The ending was such a cop out. Only edward is in character by this point then quickly went to shit. I was actually hoping bella will die just to teach alice and bella a lesson on priorities. They can always just postpone the 'perfect' wedding and have it when bella is safe and they dont have to completely alianate her family. She is already in the hospital, just make an excuse and have her admitted in an expensive and exclusive hospital then she can have goodbyes and wedding!

As you can see, i am extremely frustrated with this story. Good job.

A very very wonderful story!

Why is he the cause of pain and death ch8

I would like to know where is the Epilogue.

this is cute!

Now what a story...
More than that, even after breaking dawn I still think it might have been possible - back when bella was still human. a surprisingly reasonable explanation for something entirely unexpected
I love your edward point of views, you capture his mind so extraordinary well one might think you can read his thoughts... but we all know that is impossible, reading another's thoughts, don't we? ;-)
Kisses, E*R

Cute story

Just starting to read...

THIS CHAPTER WAS REALLY GOOD1 HOW DID YOU COME UP WITH THIS STUFF! ITS AMAZING. WRITE MORE!

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I ABSOLUTELY love this story! So original and really well written! But I was sad when it had to end :( Great story, well done! :) xx

OMG THIS WAS AN AWESOME STORY!

I had to read it all before reviewing, because i didnt want to wait!

I am so happy i found this, and i am happy that edward and Bella worked through it at the end! :D

awestruck cows flying in the moon...my bizarre way of saying i loved it lol

I'm sobbing right now! That was the most well written, thought-out, interesting, emotional, suspenseful, romantic story I have EVER read! You NEED to become an author! You are truly amazing and I salute you, my friend. Someone should give you a medal.

Thank you so much!