i honestly didnt think this fic would b very good. i almost didnt read it, but im bored and have nothing better to to.. but im glad i did read it, its very good and u should update very soon

por supuesto que no le cree ni picha, cree que todo es ilusion y parte de su caos mental. i don't think he believes her. i really don't. on the other hand, maybe asking logan if he was hear her inside his thoguhts may help a bit. it is a rather different way to approach the voices. i am liking it a lot.

hope that you continue doing awesome work!

laenamoradadeROGUE

Well, it's your story so only you know what best works with your plot, but I think Xavier, whatever doubts he may harbor, would at least run it past the others in leadership. I'm also kind of wondering what goes on with Logan's little Marie voice. That could lead to some very interesting mental conversations.

So as this is labelled a Rogue/Pyro fic are they just going to torment one another mentally or is there a pairing in the offing? Will her presence in his mind convince him to leave before he gets too heavily embroiled in Magneto's latest plot? If so, will he listen if for no other reason than to shut her up? lol

And what will we learn as his psyche continues to goad her? Will his psyche somehow come to know of what she learned from the 'her' in Magneto's mind?

There is still so much to explore here!

Wanda

Hm. Is this meant to be a cliffhanger? Anyways it is really good! Please add another chapter.

This makes me laugh. But I wanna read some more. So Update soon, ok?

That was very good. I liked the whole idea of it! Please continue!

dms chiva! i love fics about her voices, and this was bloody awesome! first off, very original the idea of her being in the other persons head, it is one good way to learn secrets and plots, has the voice in Magneto been able to reach her because she has been there for so long? anyways, i am soo hooked!

Magneto's introspection was nice. The new ability to communicate with her other parts is very cool. I wonder how Rogue feels about being split up like that. Professor X seems like he'd advocate the psychic X-men to respect other's privacy. I wonder how Rogue feels about this. She does seem to back off when they ask her to. Wolverine and Cody are the other POVs you still need to write?

John's characterization is great. Loved all of this.

ROFLOL! I loved the way she handled him and his commentary was hysterical. I agree with Rogue... how did he even know that about the professor? Good for John on letting her know he has more going for him than just a hot temper (hehe).

Great job on chapter 2. I know what you mean about being too busy reading all the great stories here to have time for your own writing. I certainly hope you keep it up, though, so we'll have this to distract ourselves with.

Wanda

The concept behind this is fantastic and I can see so many things coming out later on. It really depends upon what kind of feel you want this to have. Do you want humor? Angst? Is this situation permanent? If so, how will he reconcile having her with him forever? It sounds like he isn't happy with the results of his decision and may want to return. Will she be able to convince him it's a viable option? What would it take? What do those around him think of it and do they understand what's happening?

So much potential here that it's very exciting!

I'm off to read chapter 2 now. :)

Wanda

This might sound mean but...point? Is there a plot at all?

I love the line 'If I'd have wanted a conscience, I would have kept my own'! Very nice. This is an interesting take on Rogue's abilities. You should expand it.

HI,

I liked the reverse. Usually it is Rogue dealing with the entities now it is someone else. I liked it a lot can't wait for a sequel. Thanks.

-Paige

Wow. Very original concept. I love John's annoyance and Rogue as his conscience. If Rogue's bothering him this much, I wonder how much he is bothering her lol. Sequel!