Ok, a little bit too cliche, but I like it anyway. I espetially loved the moment when Naruto sang a song. Can you tell me the singer's name, I want to listen to it. Well, actually... to escape this too happy ending you could make the story longer by postpone the moment of love confession... But it's good anyway, as you said it, it's fanfiction, so why bothering about this 'too-happy-end-stuff'!

I really need to pay more attention, because when I clicked on your profile earlier I realised that I'd read all of your fics already, except for this one! But now I'm troubled - I can't decide which one I like the best. So, is it okay to say I like all of them? Seriously though, I really do love your writing style. You seem to put so much into each of your fics that they just make me want to read them all over again.

well my suggestion would be to add the (#) because some people like me for example dont know the translations for some words. other than that, it was awesome!

Yeah, surprisingly true... Your stories are just great!

Keep writing, keep writing, keep writing! Please? :)

Best wishes :)

um it was nice, buta bit too fast (example: Sasuke killed Itachi but erm theres no satisfaction or grief or whatever normal human normally feels while having your brothers blood probably all over your body...you get an idea dont ya? XD)

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but hey I liked it ;-)

this is really good, you should continue.

YAY! i like it! X3 WOOT! is there more?

sweet story so very cute to