that was a very touching story. I agree that what goku did was very thoughtless. He didn't think about the consequences, and he didn't put his family first. He was only thinking of uub. Well, I hoped he's learned his lesson now. Great story and well written too.

videl saying to gohan your dad can be dense sometimes

videl saying to gohan my new family needs to tone down the training

AWWWWW, how sweet!

Aww. This last chapter was sweet.

LOL The ending was funny, Goku was so serious about loving Pan more than traing that I couldn't help but giggle a bit.

It's always funny seeing Videl's flying speed compared to everyone else's.

What horrible timing. Now I just feel really bad for everyone. But it was a bit funny when Goku came and said 'What's going on?'

Great beginning yet a sad realization had donned upon Pan. Goku isn't coming back. Or at least anytime soon it seems. Maybe in another sven years will he return.

I love the cute Goku and Pan moments!This story was very touching!I loved it!Please do more Goku and Pan fanfics!:)

Love this story.
Keep it up! :D

O LOVE IT ITS ITS SOOO CUTE!

are you freakin' kidding me! that is not a complete story! how can that possibly be complete, i mean, nothing is resolved what so ever. i did like the two chapters though, but you should have kept going. this is the exact story i was looking for; you know, goku leaves to train uub, pan feels betrayed by goku and runs away, goku finds her or whatever the writer chooses to have pan or goku do.

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Great story. I liked it. Can you read my stories?