Wow that was great! One of my favourite Kenuno oneshots

I liked the story, but the ending needs a little work. You end it to suddenly.

This was entirely too cute. I could imagine this actually happening in Bleach if Kubo didn't have this annoying law about no romantic relationships between characters. Great story!

This was so fantastic. I love this pairing so much..I'd love to see more!

Wonderfully written! :D

You are amazing! I love this couple soooooooooooo much! I love how she just accepts his possessiveness like he is a child. Its almost like shes saying 'yes yes child I am not paying any mind. Whatever makes you feel better' Lol she's great.

Aaah! Loved it :)

xxx

holy crap i think you just converted me to this pairing... *sits in a daze* that was... soo... good! . short, but still good!

now i want to see more of this, hehehe...

Till next *salute-waves* Sayounara!

-Ikasury

Beautiful. Artful. Endearing.

I loved it. Bravo.

You are awesome, you do realise what you've done. You wrote Zaraki Kenpachi into a brilliant love story WITHOUT taking anyone out of character.

nice, although it would be better if you describe your lemon.

this was truly . . . magnificient. the best Kenpachi x Retsu fanfic i have ever read. even better than mine, i think. *bows and applauds* i'd like to see more from you on these two but if not, then that's okay too. great fanfic!

dat...was like one of the best oneshots i have ever read!

write more plz!

Awesome chapter keep up the good work and update soon!

That was sweet, lovely and sexy. Good job!