I did enjoy this a lot. The whole concept of kunoichi representing strong women and then acting like complete damsels in distress (well, mostly Sakura and Hinata) really irritated me. What's the point of their hard work and training if they go gaga every time they see a pretty boy? I love your work and your poetic format, as well as your irregular punctuation. It actually makes the piece more attractive, which is a first for a Grammar Hunter like myself. Also, the princesses you chose for each one were amazingly accurate. I am constantly astounded by your ability to hit the nail on the head.

And, as always, good work.

Love it!

Haha really liked this one.

For the last few lines though...

"Princesses?" Is questioning the line (in normal text without italics) above it, but those two are different contexts...I'm bad at explaining what I'm actually thinking, so please don't take offence to any of this, but 'and the princesses fall under, and wait for their princes to save them' seems to be implying actual princesses rather than Hinata, Tenten, Ino and Sakura. However, the line 'princesses?' is directed towards the above mentioned females, so it would make more sense for that phrase to be something more along the lines of 'but these are not princesses' or something like that.

Once again, I'm horrible at explaining, just ignore this if you don't quite get what I'm trying to say. But this was awesomely written (don't care if that's a word or not) so yeah... -_-'

:D

I love that your story portrays strong female characters. The twist to the fairytale is very nicely done.

I love your words, your writing style, your message. Jealous :)

I love all your kunoichi-centric stories! So well written and entertaining and deeply moving and personally satisfying as a woman myself. Thank you for writing these tributes.

The descriptions you wrote, especially the one for Tenten, were absolutely enviable. I wish I had that skill to weave words into such enchanting tales (hah pun?). This was pretty amazing because I love anything with kunoichi power so many kudos to you.

wow. this fic show women strenght. not weak but strong. great fic

... Your fanfics never fail to leave me with goosebumps on my skin and my mouth agape.

I don't have enough hands for a thousand thumbs ups... which is what this deserves

LOVED IT

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This is so, so beautiful.

Wow, this is amazing! I never thought those stories suited the kunoichi that well. You made all those fairy tales better xD
It's always better when the girls are strong, then they realize Princes were never needed.
I loved it from summary and beginning till the very last line.
Thanks for writing! :)

Btw, I love and appreciate how you made effort on matching each kunoichi on a fitting fairy tale for them. Love Sakura the most.

Wow! I do not think I am a strong feminist, but I think it is about time that females are given due credit. I love fairy tales, but I love real tales better. You have done a very creative piece. Sorry for the lack of better word to describe your awesomeness. I am no writer. T_T

Once again, I'm loving the symbolism and the stories you picked out for each of the girls. I enjoyed this!

Was just going through your stuff. [I have ALREADY reviewed literally everything in the Naruto fandom]

So I am telling you of the errors in this one.

Their are grammatical errors. Go back and check them.

They are too stoopid to be made by some one as cool as you are so correct them! :DDD ;)

- I STILL cannot believe I haven't read your new fic. Just reading it now... :D