This was a great little story. I love Toby, I tend to go for the shier types so thats probably why lol. I think you did a great job at keeping both Toby and Pam in character. I also appreciated the incorporation of the dialogue used in the series. Because of the events you created around these characters, it provided the original dialogue a different context. Awesome job! I see you haven't updated in twoish years, hopefully you come back to this!

I recently got into The Office and when I went looking for Toby/Pam fic, this is the only story I could find that really fit the bill. Just romantic and cosy and gentle, like a soft blanket on a rainy day - and it rained a lot today, btw! It was nice to read. I don't know if you're still around on the internet but if you are, I wanted you to know your story is still reaching people. Thank you 3

This is honestly THE BEST writing I have ever seen. Throughout this whole time you've kept the characters true to their personalities. Close to the end, most readers would think that Pam and Toby would have...- I'll call itadult time. However, readers should know that Pam respects Toby's shyness and the fact that he takes time (not a hasty guy) Pam also isn't a hasty woman. This is the definition of true love. Finding comfort and joy not centralizing lust. Despite me not being a PamToby fan, your writing has convinced me to love the pair! I have read countless fanfics and even romantic novels but I must say that this is my favorite. There is a good pace, its realistic, stays true to character and its kept me engaged all the way through! Well done! Thank you so much for taking the time to write such a beautiful masterpiece!

This is honestly THE BEST writing I have ever seen. Throughout this whole time you've kept the characters true to their personalities. Close to the end, most readers would think that Pam and Toby would have...- I'll call itadult time. However, readers should know that Pam respects Toby's shyness and the fact that he takes time (not a hasty guy) Pam also isn't a hasty woman. This is the definition of true love. Finding comfort and joy not centralizing lust. Despite me not being a PamToby fan, your writing has convinced me to love the pair! I have read countless fanfics and even romantic novels but I must say that this is my favorite. There is a good pace, its realistic, stays true to character and its kept me engaged all the way through! Well done! Thank you so much for taking the time to write such a beautiful masterpiece!

Hello! I know it’s been nine years, but I’m still here and I would still love to read more. I’m super into this pairing and this is the best fix I’ve found yet! So if you’re out there... so am I and i eagerly await more when you’re ready 3 please!

omg if only this happened. this felt so natural and real

Agh I wish this story didn't cut off here, of all places ;3;

im watching this epasode right now

I know this is 3 years late but I really hope you'll continue this! Toby makes me so sad I wish I could just hug him! Or give him a puppy. Haha.

Were I older, and were Toby real, I'd totally date him. XD

this is a great story, very realistic and believable and I reeeeeally hope you'll finish it out.

Amazing story! I really hope you continue this!

I found myself in a need for a Toby fix and my gosh this was just perfect! Once I started, I couldn't for the life of me stop, so I apologize for not reviewing every chapter...I couldn't wait to get the next part. ) This had me giddy with all of its deliciously sweet gooeyness and I found the entire thing to be so brilliantly in character. I love LOVE how you pretty much followed the time line of the show and incorporated many of the actual scenes while putting your own spin on them. It made the story that much more believable and the scenes you developed for the 'off camera' parts fit in so nicely. It made what interactions between Pam/Toby we were greeted with on the show seem that much more sweet...or awkward. P Awesome fic!

This story is amazing!

I'm so happy that at this point, it went AU and Toby got his Pam. :D

The way you write is beautiful and the scenes that you presented were terrific. I loved the lecture, and the diner, and all of the other seamless moments you captured. I never thought I'd be upset when Jim came back, but I was!

You made their pairing realistic and quite wonderful. Well done. I hope you update again. :)

God, I love you so much. Toby is such a frickin' CUTIE. Seriously, I love you. I don't even think you know how much. Like. Oh my god. You need to update, please. Please? This story just tugged on my heart strings and-and oh my god I loved it.

Crap, you haven't updated in like, a year.

REVIVE THIS PLEASE? I'll be your best friend? You really are a good writer, and your characterization is perfect and it was so believable.

YOU HAVE A FAN AS OF RIGHT NOW. Write more Toby/Pam? Like, not even just this story. If you did, I... I DON'T EVEN KNOW BUT YOU ROCK.

Nice! I've been looking for a good Pam/Toby story. I'm impressed! :)

I just stumbled upon this fanfic today, and wasted the good part of my afternoon reading it. And man, it's one of the best stories I've read in a while. You are a fantastic writer and the characters are perfectly done, and... wow. You do Toby and Pam really, really well, and I cannot wait for more!