Great story! Are you going to continue with it?

good story so far! :-) question: what did they tell Georgiana as to why Darcy is accompanying them?

I would still love to find out what happened to Lizzy and Darcy

DAMN! Close but not close enough. Is he going to get Bingley and he's back to Netherfield? I hope.

YAHOO! Get him Darcy!

SIGH...Darcy to the rescue. But where are her Aunt and Uncle?

It's terrible to leave your readers with an uncompelted story. Please finish it!

Hi Madam,
May we hope the next chapters ...
i love your storie.
Kiss
Hélène

Forget Lydia.

Please finish this story!

Elizabeth4Will, I hope this note finds you well. I know it has been over 6 years since you have updated and that is usually not a good sign. Just wanted you to know (in case you still read your reviews), that I have very much enjoyed your story & hope that one day you may finish, if you so desire. Your characterizations are very good, and I found the storyline intriguing and engaging. Thank you for sharing with us!

I know this story is several years old, but I just found it yesterday and finished it today because I liked it so much. I don't think I've read a fic where Lizzy successfully runs away from Darcy when she sees him at his home. Also I think you did well making Lizzy not immediately get over what happened to her, some stories just go "okay X happened to Y person, but they got over it in a few days" which isn't realistic. Anyway, I'm glad I found this :)

Desperate for a beta, the switch between 1st and 3rd person is distracting, but the story line, while not original, is very sweet.
Thanks for sharing

I adore your Mr. Darcy. You feed our need for more examples of his caring, gentlemanly protectiveness of Lizzy. I long for more!

If you'd like a Beta reader, I would be happy to give it a try.