The story is no different than cannon if he grew up with the influence of the Hyuga Narurto shouldn’t be as idiotic and weak as he is in this story. He even has other clans speaking and helping him yet he doesn’t seem any different than he was in cannon. Uchiha and Hyuga marriage please those two clans would rather have a fight to the death than be involved with each other, it’s common knowledge that they have a rivalry and dislike one another, and always boast about which dojustu is superior, I’m sorry but rewrite this story or stop writing it I’m not one to be negative but their are so many wrongs in this story at it is a insult to compare this to the great work of starks team 8

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this is a great story so far but there is one major flaw i believe there is way to much crying to ninjas that is a show of weakness and you've had both hinata and naruto cry in front of several people which would not stand well with the hyuuga clan as masking emotions is a big thing for their clan as well that's all just for future stories crying isn't bad but when they cry three times every chapter it kind of gets annoying

It's a really good story. I love it and really can't wait to see how it ends.
Are you gonna stop the story at the point where Naruto ended or are you gonna continue on to end at the point of the 4th great ninja war where Naruto Shippuden ended.
Also are we gonna see Naruto and Hinata's kids (Boruto and Himawari) Will they be quarter demons because of their parents merging to become half demons or will it be half demons but not as strong as their parents.

I like your work. I think this is a lovely story. It's just too short a chapter to read.

Well, it was very intresting but why did you stop writing? You could make Sasuke und Naruto friends because Sasuke understand Naruto and will have Naruto help him to kill Itachi. Hinata and Naruto married and Kushina and Sasuke's Mother are going to help their sons also to kill Danzo for keeping them captive!

Such a great story! I can't wait for the next chapter and I would be happy to be one of your beta readers, if you need another one of course. I also can't wait for Kyuubi and Hime to truly meet again, I would like to hear some of their story!

you spelled the title wrong -_-

WTF? Naruto purrs?

It still bugs me that Naruto was one-shotted by Neji. Even though he was caught off guard, Naruto shouldn't have taken that much damage.

Naruto and Hinata cry a lot. Every other word seems to come with tears. What is up with that? It also struck me that all of a sudden Naruto, Yugito, and Shinbo can speak like and use the vocabulary of adults. That seems a little off.

Ok, I have only a few problems with the story.

1) Zabuza and Haku would not be able to join the Leaf. (At least, not how you are setting it up.) Zabuza is not only a rogue ninja and one of the Seven Swordsman, he is inherently bloodthirsty. He craves battle. To have him not only accept Naruto's offer but also be accepted by the Leaf wouldn't happen. The only possible way I can think that he would be accepted is if he was brainwashed by Ibiki, which I assume is highly illegal in the ninja world.

2) I'm ok with Hinata being somewhat of a Jinchuuriki. What I don't understand is why the ninja that sealed the fox inside her did it BEFORE taking her. Why not take her first and then seal it? Sealing her first just makes it that much worse for them if they get caught or killed. It's hard to explain but I hope it get's cleared up later. Also, why would they seal the Kyuubi's mate inside Hinata? I mean really? How could they ever hope to tame her to make her a weapon when the fox will always side with Naruto because he has the Kyuubi?

3) Lastly, the whole group of jichuuriki being in the Leaf is politically incorrect. The lands have an unwritten law that if one village or area becomes too powerful, aka. 3 jinchuuriki and another lesser demon, they become target number 1. The tailed beasts are spread out to keep order. Putting them all in one place, especially if it becomes known, can and will result in major destruction.

Don't get me wrong, I love this story, I can't stop reading, I'm hooked. It's just little details like this that bug me. _

Sorry I haven't been able to review until now. First I would like to say that your story thus far is very interesting. They were a few parts that seemed rushed or confusing (chapter 2 when all of those jinchuuriki's died in like one hit) but for the most part this story is awesome. I love how much work you put into building the relationship between Naruto and Hinata. Also, chapter 7 seems like it isn't really connected to the previous chapters. Maybe you started with chapter seven and then added previous chapters for background info? Either way, great story so far and I look forward to reading the rest of it.

Very good story sofar hope you complete is soon.

hello so im like well most really good ones have 3 or maby 4 chapters BUT THIS WAS A GREAT FIRST CHAPTER so when i was going to be disapointed for the ONLY 2 OR 3 MORE I FOUND 37 GOD/GODS/GODDISES BLESS YOU KIND SIR/LADY