This story is great. But, sometimes I really get frustrated with reading stories where the girl is so timid and unsure of herself. I mean I know this story is cliché based and I should not read it if I am not interested in these types of stories. But, I really have to say that I liked your writing style. It is very clear and simple. And that is the only reason I stuck reading till the last chapter of the story.

First of, why is Bella do timid. She literally has has no confidence. She can't stand up for herself. She is always crying like a timid soul. The protagonist of the story should be a strong character. She should have some confidence. Edward is a jerk and Bella is very forgiving.

For being smart, your bella is sure dumb as hell. I mean seriously, exactly how many people she knows in her school who have bronze hair and green eyes. And did she wore headphones whenever Edward talked to her that she can't even recognise his voice!

Shes just a bitch

Slut bitch

U made me cry! thanks for this awsome story.

amazing i loved it u r an amazing writer and i really liked your idea for the story

Cute story. Wish Bella wasn't so forgiving

Never thought Edward would be such a jerk

ome! i LOVE it! pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee eeeeeeeeeeeeeeezzz! finish! it! soon!

Please keep going

There are only so many authors that can pull off the Cinderella Story. This is the best one,yet! Great Job!

Awesome!

It's a greta story but I think you need to give it another chapter maybe an epilogue Because I don't think you gave the story a proper finish! Other than that it was great! xoxoxo

So cute! I love it!