Oh my, very good. Its sad to know how this is what hinata sees in herself tho, but the love and admiration she has for naruto is so sweet . i hope you make another chapter. It was a really good story

THIS WAS SO GOD!

I LOVE IT!

I really enjoyed this story. It was well written and it wasn't OOC in the least. Hinata actually would think things like this. It's refreshing to finally find a good story with her emotions as the subject.

I would love it if you wrote a second part to it.

*sniff, sniff* that was so beautiful! Please continue, this matches Hinata so well!

Aww, this is so sa, ut in a way so cute!

You sould make it so she writes all that in her diary, and she can't stand it no one so she want to die, but Naruto reads her diary (thinking it was some scroll) and saves her..

i know you could write that lol ur good at those tings.

This is a fantasti story, and im sorry i didnt review eariler! If you want, i think you should do something more with this, i would so be reading it! lol

Love all your stories, this is again one of your best!

Love it!

M x

i agree with Vrock8, it's awesome by itself but if you have other ideas feel free to post

"His amazing, Hokage worthy strength" ;)

Anyway, the fic is quite good and complete in itself, I don't think it needs a second chapter.