Reviews for Object of My Desire |
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Monster King chapter 16 . 5/23/2019 Great job I hope you continue |
sd74 chapter 6 . 1/17/2018 Not sure if this is a thing, how can Sakura instantly know that she's pregnant for her to aim a chakra scalpel at that specific spot? She could've immobilize her when she thought Senaide was a civilian (which is stupid to think so). I thought only the Hyuuga does what she had done. |
imortalshadows chapter 1 . 12/6/2017 is english your second language? if it is then the story isn't so bad just simple grammer issues that could use a clean up, if english is your primary language, you need to improve or at least invest in something called grammerly its free and most of the issues here can be corrected easily, nice plot though. |
Mark chapter 16 . 11/16/2017 Wut. |
Joseph chapter 16 . 10/10/2017 Why the fuck are they so short!? Hmmmmmmm? |
Naruto Loves FemKyuubi chapter 15 . 9/18/2017 "Waves Cheerfully At You"H-hey My Dear MidnightShadowGoddess21!:3And"Blushes And Smiles Shyly And I Hugs You Happily And Warmly And Sweetly And Softly And Kindly And Lovingly"W-welcome!:3Back!:3 ( (A-and I Am Really Really And Truly I Am Happy And Warm And Glad And Delighted To See You And Talk With You (T-thanks For Making Another Chapter For Your Perfect And Sweet And Lovely Object of My Desire Perfect And Sweet And Lovely NarutoxFemKyuubi Love Couple Love Story And I Will Enjoy Watching And Reading Your Perfect And Sweet And Lovely Object of My Desire Perfect And Sweet And Lovely NarutoxFemKyuubi Love Couple Love Story)I-i Like And Love And Adore Our Perfect And Sweet And Lovely NarutoxFemKyuubi Love Couple (Not A Uzumaki Now Nor Ever)B-because Our Perfect And Sweet And Lovely NarutoxFemKyuubi Love Couple Are Demons Not Humans)My Dear MidnightShadowGoddess21!:3 A-and Let!:3The Games!:3Begin!:3My Dear!;) |
Sir Naru chapter 1 . 9/18/2017 yay an update |
agitofang666 chapter 13 . 10/3/2014 How come peoples computers always break when theres a good chapter coming? |
genesicgaogaigarvsgodgundam chapter 2 . 9/27/2014 nice |
ricke0713 chapter 13 . 6/11/2014 I HOPE U FUCKING START SOON THIS IS BULLSHIT IT'S SOOOO FUCKING GOOD WHY...WHY...I KNOW YOU'R PROBLEM WITH THE LAPTOP BUT THAT WAS 4 YEARS AGO! Please contiue this I LOVE THIS! |
Shaun.van.der.Linde chapter 13 . 2/3/2014 you realy should start with this story again it was very good just n bit of your bad english but nobody is perfect right? |
ExplosiveSex chapter 6 . 1/5/2014 The grammar and pronunciation made me lose a few IQ points. |
Slazamnewgiddy chapter 13 . 7/18/2013 This is a very good story, and you should update soon. But I fear this an abandoned story due to you not updating in three years. *sigh* It was good while it lasted... |
halibellover chapter 5 . 7/7/2013 Great story! |
Gruffard chapter 13 . 11/6/2012 Oh. And we were going to see Naruto beat up Jiraiya... |