lol i totally loved the ending you did an amazing on this this made my day

omg..that was insanely cute and adorable! XDDD

loved it! XDD

That was awesomleysuperrificalidocous! Lol word doesnt exist...well now it does that was an awesome story I truly luved it twas awesome I like ur style its really unique most oneshots ar based offa stuff ppl see in movies and the like but this is from ur own weird imagination pages lol pm me and let me know I'm not a TOTAL freak?

Phew *fans self* that was some smut. I totally loved roxas in this fic, yay for making out and no dye!

Of course Axel and Roxas making out would lead to another more interesting situation.

Haha, and the end was perfect.

Funny, just how I like my 'happily ever afters'.

So was Axel seme the whole way thru? ;)

Wonderful, just wonderful! I was very amused by Axel's misfortune-turned-luck. And, as I've said before, good job! It's well written. :D

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Hopefully you'll write more at some point in time because you do the pairing justice. You really do. x3

love this. it's nice to find a sexy little one shot that actually has a decent story with some real humor and character depth.

There are two things I really like about this - one is the inclusion of Hayner as Axel's rival for Roxas's affections. I've never seen that before and I thought it was a really nice touch.

The other was your Roxas. Oh, scoop me off the floor! Everyone portrays him as such a girl, so its nice to see his dominant side :P

Excellent job, this is a favorite of mine and one I return to reread with embarassing frequency. You rock!

haha i love this. i can just imagine the 3rd person's perspective at the beginning. roxas and axel sitting on the couch bored. roxas and axel talking. roxas and axel making out like animals and stumbling to the bedroom. haha. seriously though, this was a very well-written oneshot. good job!

I only have one word to say to this...EPIC!

I love you for this! *hugs* One of the best AkuRoku's I have ever read.

Totally awesome, hot, kickass fanfiction. Thank you.

This fic was so awesome. Very hot! Wish we coulda seen what Hayners reaction was! And that last line was just perfect!

haha couldnt stop laughing

i love it!

Well, at least now i know you don't dye your hair."

so funny. i love the way you write. it was very entertaining :)

Wow. That was very..entertaining Very nice writing style, by the way. It was a pleasure to read this. I love the idea for the story, too. Overall, realy good job.