That was nice and a new take on Starfire’s reaction, its much better than those fics that turn her batshit crazy. I hope you make more robrae fics or try ro write damirae fics next!

Thanks for letting me know ahead of time, my anonymous friend from down under. I'm a bit anal retentive about spelling errors, grammatical errors, etc. So you letting me know ahead of time that words are going to be spelled differently is really helpful.

I liked this, I do liek the occasional Robin/Raven pairing but was getting sick of the Star bashing because I adore Starfire.

I actually kinda want to see a Rob/Rae/Star fic, but the only one I found was full of bad touch and they were nothing like themselves at all, just weird and lacking actual human emotion.

I wanna see Robin thinking he's a gross hormonal boy for wanting both of them, Raven freaking out totally for having those feelings for not just one but two people, and Starfire confused as to why this is a problem at all...

I'm admittedly a greater fan of Robin and Raven than of Robin and Starfire, but I don't understand bashing a character you don't like. It's bad writing. That said, I do like Starfire as a character and Robin and Starfire as a couple. She's sweet and kind, a good fighter, genuinely cares about her friends, and altogether a deep character when you consider that beneath the surface she has a pretty shitty past what with the way she was raised and treated on Tamaran and still manages to move on and grow. I'm not a die-hard fanboy when it comes to any one ship (all the better for it, fanboys suck) even RobXRae but I am sorry about all the Starfire bashing and shitty, out of character RobxRae fics. :/

Most of the stories I read of robrae were not out of character n der were no character bashing...teen titan which I have seen I saw starfire as gud friend, loud ,clingy to Robin but cant imagine her to be bitchy person...MY ALL TIME FAV COUPLE IS ROBRAE CANT SEE HIM WITH ANYONE ELSE...

First off, I have just started a sweep of all your works as I recently got a FF account (I'd read them before, but not having an account, there wasn't much purpose to leaving an anon-review). Secondly, I'm very glad you haven't deleted this story, I feel it is needed, that its existence in some way makes up for the errors and behaviors of others. As for myself, I far prefer the "canon" pairings Rob/Star and BB/Rae, but I can actually understand an AU BB/Star pairing and have read a few in my day. Rob/Rae has always seemed to me (much as it does to you apparently) to be a strong sibling-like bond of friendship and doesn't come through as a realistic romantic pairing. Only rarely does it make any sort of sense (I believe Force wrote a story with a rather compelling match-up - kind of - between the two).

Don't delete it, I think this short story is wonderful. Don't get me wrong, I'm a hard RobxStar fan (they were my OTP for the longest time), but I love the way how you portrayed all these characters. It's so well written and I agree with your ranting. Most people never truly appreciate Starfire or keep Raven in character, but you've managed to keep all of them in character.

Your writing is amazing. I hope you never delete this story. I'm glad I happened to stumble upon this fic. I look forward to reading more of your stories!

I totally agree with the Author's note. I loved how you described their characters. You are an amazing writer and I love all of your stories!

So well written with so much thought put in behind it and I completely agree with your note at the end. My respect for you has increased 1000%, you care so much about the plot and how you depict the characters, which is something I truly admire since it's rarely seen in fanfictions these days. Thank you 3

Like ur story im not robrae shipper and i agree with every thing u said ..
Love ya

I never wanted to read this because I am such a hardcore robstar shipper... but i'm glad i did. i've noticed it too - the way these characters that show so much growth in the cartoon become shallow and cruel in other people's hands. well said, kry :)

- chann3l.0rang3

Hi. I liked the story, and found the afterword to be a fair presentation of your perspective. I hope you don't delete it. You did right by the source material, even if you took things in a different direction. And isn't that what good fanfiction is supposed to do?
Thanks for writing.

This is my second time reading and reviewing this reminds me of the things Im doing wrong in my writing!

So thank you!

I think it's an awesome story. I'm good with any story that ends with Raven with Robin, but this is a story that's believable to the series. RxR44evr!

This story is HUMBLING. Fave part - The last section with BB and Star... Could make me cry... A true favorite of mine. And I'm not a character basher. I like BBTerra, BBxRae, StarRob, RobRae... Actually anything that isn't homosexual... I've read Jinx and Robin fics before, LOL...