Hello there!

I've been reading and re-reading this series for a while now and quite honestly it's one of my favorite stories on the site. Yet out of everything that happens in the story, this was the part that always stuck out to me the most. The fact that you just casually hop in and have a chat with one of the characters is so bizarre yet totally fits with the story is brilliant. Just thought I'd let you know that, keep up the good work in the future! _

On a side note, you made reference to Allo Allo. My Dad is old friends with a bloke whose father was a man named Gareth Gwenlan, who just happened to be Head of Comedy for the BBC. It was him who originally commissioned Allo Allo to be made oddly enough as well as producing Only Fools and Horses. Small world, ain't it?

I see your batman reference. You took her little plan, and turned it on its head. Oh and I love what you did with this chapter

Oh man, I hate those agent guys. I always have. I hate what they do to kairi and sora

Damn, Anti! Even Grima didn't hit that below the belt while he had possessed me, and neither did Darkheart!

OMG you brought in the drizzt series?!

You made mah day by adding full metal alchemist I could tell by Alphonse and a short and short tempered ed

Dude final kairi you better watch your 6

The chapter was good, though I don't think I'll ever get used to Kingdom Hearts characters EVER playing Kingdom Hearts.

A little slow, and not too much happened. But eh, it was still pretty good.

Been ages since I reviewed. I actually really enjoyed this one. I'm starting to warm up more to the humour, and if there's one thing I love, it's a war meeting.

Whoa... I'm not expecting court scene to be this good.. :)

You know, I can't find myself disagreeing with the AMRGP (except for their torture of children, of course). I wouldn't mind if it was a constitutional monarchy in which the power of the monarch is reduced to a minimum, but from what I've read Radiant Garden will become an absolute monarchy. Giving absolute power to a single person is never a good idea. Sure, Kairi and Namine will no doubt be 'kind' leaders but that doesn't mean they'll also be 'good' leaders. And there's no guarantee that their descendants will be as good as them.

Regarding the long time it takes for the government to do anything important, well that's the price you have to pay for democracy. Discussion and argument are essential for considering all viewpoints and consequently reaching the best informed and most representative decision. Autocrats would be able to make decisions much faster, but choosing speed over quality is just stupid.

Anyway, the AMRGP are no doubt villains in this story. Might I ask if there's no chance for redemption for them?

Right when Sora thought about his friends pairing up i immediately thought of Hayner and Olette no joke

all of those organization pranks made my day

Finally, we see that long-awaited battle! And, of course, your writing shows itself beautifully. And I was almost swept up in the euphoria at the end; the conclusion was that satisfying! God job, and I expect more in Light's Growth.