Heavy handed narration, switches PoV with no warning and few clues. Could use some actual dialogue and characterization.

Considering the Legend of his weapon, that should be more effective than normal against Artoria. The sword was made to kill Dragons after all, and despite it excelling at killing the spiritually-inclined, killing Dragons is what it was /made for/. And since Artoria has that Dragon Core or Blood of the Dragon or some such in her...

All that blood huh? Guess it does work.

Is there anyway for Shinji's death not to feel cathartic?

The good parts of Guts are returning YAY!

No shame really Shiro and Rin, greater beings are doing what you are suffering.

Of course this would happen, melody of madness indeed.

The similarities and differences between Assassin and the rest is the real joy of this fic, they don't want to deal with his NP though.

What is Guts' stats I wonder?

"And he never to death be slain." As the other servants are trying to comprehend.

I cannot wait for Assassin and Archer 2 to meet, they are complete opposites.

Assassin? Quite fitting in a way, what with him being able to kill just by the swing of his sword.

This makes for excellent foreshadowing for the corruption of the Holy Grail being a thing since Guts is both the only actual "hero" in Berserk and a being who spent 99% of his life near death's arms.

A beautiful work of art.

I don't know Fate series. Never was into it, but damn. I think you made my interest rise enough to sit down and finally watch the anime.

the fuck
heracles cannot be killed the same way twice and gains major resistance to familiar attacks

your an idiot

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thia is really cool

huh.

Good Work...! 10