Reviews for Luck of the Draw |
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peaches-jpg chapter 10 . 5/8 This comment, I feel is kinda pointless, I'm not sure if you're even alive tbh. but I enjoyed the story nonetheless. you're writing is quiet lovely. Character bashing isn't my favorite thing, so what was being done to Karin didnt sit right with me. homegirl didnt deserve it, i wanted to give her a hug lol & I love the lemons lol, but the relationship developement was a bit rushed with sasuke and sakura. I know they have previous history but its been years since hes spoken to the girl. probably a chapter or two with Sakura as "Rei" with little fluff momnets (I love the hair cutting btw) would have been great to solidify Sasuke's "natural"/unavoidable attraction to Sakura. but anyways, I'm not really mad at where this "ended" because at least it wasn't a big cliffhanger. Thank youuu3 |
Ji Hyun1 chapter 1 . 4/29 Don't abandon this story please. It's year 2020 and I'm still hoping you'll still update. |
Saysay chapter 10 . 6/9/2019 Lanjut? Next? I like your fiction... Lobe you |
Tabi chapter 10 . 7/23/2018 Please continue |
Ji Hyun1 chapter 10 . 11/24/2017 Please update! ! I like how Sasuke is not so OOC here! I love it! ! I can't wait for the next! please update |
Guest chapter 10 . 10/23/2017 Hm...i dnt like how karin is antagonised here. In canon she's actually a nice caring person. |
Guest chapter 10 . 10/21/2017 This story is so good! Sasuke is a bit... no, a lot more open about his emotions than in Canon of course, but I love all the romance! But I really worry about the girls... |
Epic Otaku Cherry chapter 10 . 6/27/2017 Hey, I just want to let you know that I adore this story, and that if you ever feel you'll he able to continue it, you'll have plenty of readers like myself eager to pick it up again. I really love the way you wrote Sasuke and his blossoming relationship with Sakura (ha, pun), and I also really liked Sakura's relationship with Haruka and Kimiko. I read Summer Camp, too, and I can see how much you've improved from just Summer Camp to this story. Your writing for Luck of the Draw is LEAGUES ahead of what it used to be. You improved so well I'm even jealous - my writing doesn't improve as quickly as I'd like, and that combined with general disinterest, lack of motivation, and disgust with somebody of my old writing, I haven't updated my own stories in the past few years (which is why I'm not badgering you to complete yours - I get how it can be). If you ever feel like coming back to finishing your stories or even writing new ones for the Naruto fandom (specifically SasuSaku), don't ever feel like no one will read them (actually, this goes for anything you write, not just Naruto). You're a great writer and will continue to improve. There will always be those who appreciate and flock to your work. Just don't let the negatives (whether it be flames in the reviews or life) stop you from doing something you love (doesn't have to be writing, but I'd highly suggest keeping it as a hobby if nothing else). Love, Your fan, Epic Otaku Cherry |
alinefgs chapter 10 . 5/15/2017 Adorei continua bjs |
Law23 chapter 10 . 3/18/2017 Hi there ;) I just read your story and I like it very much Please continue the story please :D |
Guest chapter 3 . 1/16/2017 I'm loving the way you got this story going,she pray for help n my (oops) I meant Rei/Sakura gets help from Him..pause got to light a cigarette GooseBumps |
KatUchiha743 chapter 10 . 1/9/2017 Will u continue this story |
Fiona chapter 10 . 12/5/2016 Well you definitely have over 500, and it's been a while, you must update. This is an AMAZING story _! PLEASE keep writing! |
dreamsandfaiths chapter 10 . 11/18/2016 please update soon! I want to know what happens next. |
vampireprincess141 chapter 10 . 2/28/2016 Loved your story,pleas update when you can! |