One thing that REALLY bothers me is that the other characters constantly refer to Harry as 'Harry' in their thoughts when they should only know him as Cheshire. This happens everywhere throughout the story

Really stupid

Just out of curiosity, does cat-harry look anything like this? Ignoring the fact that’s the person in the picture is blue.

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why didn't Harry just wish for milk?

In this fic Ron is no better than Pettigrew

I hate how author's have to apologise or explain themselves for how they write there stories or how the characters are acting OOC of fucking course they're going to be "acting OOC" they're not the original author's of whatever fandom they choose to write about that's the whole fucking point of writing Fanfiction in the first place. Sorry, for the swearing and extreme run-on sentence, I'm just fed up with people complaining that you've (any fanfic author) changed the characters too much or not enough. So far I like it, thank-you for sharing.

I remembered why I fucking hate this because the Harry is basically the same and I fucking hate reading about hermoine the bitchy know it all and Ron the jealous piece of shit

Though I am enjoying the story, when did the brotherhood find out Harry's name rather than they one they gave him?

If all the authors stories are like this then I'm not gonna bother reading anymore of this persons fanfiction. The first page and I was half dead, like most stories out there harry relies on hermione for everything I mean does he not listen to the news, and how does hermione suddenly know genetics, everything is just unexplained or looks like it was randomly put in the story

And Harry now has silver haired unexplained. Kurt being near Logan unexplained. Harry's sudden location unexplained. Where Logan went when he was supposed to be following Harry unexplained. What ever the fuck the huntsman were doing instead of helping Harry unexplained. Percy being the twist villain unexplained. Harry somehow mistaking an undisguised Percy for his best fucking friend despite having gained a superior eyesight unexplained and unbelievable. Hermione missing the classic signs of her husband being imperiod regardless of her own dis-stress cuz she notices everything unexplained. Percy's malfunction unexplained. Why Harry is so disturbingly bothered that the sibling he only heard ill of is actually rotten unexplained. So Harry never thought Percy would act out against him in such a way? So what? Non of his family had much good to say about him and he's purposely spoken out against Harry more than once. It's not like it was Harry's own godson or even Voldemort back from the dead again. THAT would be cause for surreal disbelief. Then the story gets all jarbled to the point of confusion this chapter where Harry is just out somewhere in the form of a damn tiger. I'm sitting here like the fuck did I just read?! And how quickly you made everyone emotionally attached is just weird. He knew them all for less than a week. Maybe 3 or 4 days and he loves them? Knows how they always are? Refuses to let anything bad happen to them? And then he's tired of some waiting game with the council and wants it over? What game? I was under the impression he was trying to start a new life while laying low incase they decided to look for him. Harry's even given two new names and they're hardly used. Just what the fuck were you doing with this story? The basic base idea I saw was good and it was interesting to keep me reading. Continuity was just a bit off until the last few chapters where it became way off. Seriously though. I feel like you could have written this better. This drama and tension had potential but it seems like you just...shortcut it or something. Hope you have time to redo this someday and make it better.

This is just getting ridiculous. What happened to the other mutants? How did wizards even capture (Kurt, I think?) when he was at the facility? Why and how could they even assume that he's Harrys friend? Wizards are a bunch a cowards AND they don't know where Harry is so WHY are they trying to bait him to them when they hold such unholy fear of him? Also this whole damn story has gone on and on about how ineffective magic is on mutants and how different the two abilities are from each other. Yet Hermione's magic worked just fine on and against mutants of different types AND Harry's magic was blocked just the same as mutant powers. Can you please explain what the actual fuck?

And his claws were able to come out now, why?

You're telling me a walking god no one is prepared for can be contained in a damn cage and machines? Man if you don't get that weak shit outta here and give the goods!

Already saying he loves them? Really? And they kept calling him Harry. A name they shouldn't have known. Also has Harry's hair turned pale or something?

How does Remy know Harry's real name?!