...I am awaiting a sequel- which may or may not ever come to pass- with bated breath.
This story was something... original; inspired. Most of the time, I did not notice any issues with grammar or spelling.
All in all, great story!

Ok so I liked the beginning but some of this is confusing , Sorry!

I hate Jack! Really, I do! I just hate her and all fics concerning or involving her.

wow. this is good.

I loved it!

Mrs Jones didn't smile, she's dead. Julia Rothman however, I could be making a complete fool of myself by too slowly considering that Alex was grievously taking the command from Mrs. Jones as per usual bug if so it's obscure or under emphasised

I'm a little late to the party, but I really loved that story. One of the few good ones I've read so far that's actually had an ending.

I loved it. You did good keeping me hooked. I was on the edge of my seat the whole time.

I'm very happy that Alex and Jack are still alive.

Not Jack too. NOOOOOOO!

NOOOOOO! I'm going to go cry now that Alex is dead. It is the end of the world.

Sequel? Please? It's so good!

wolf, fox,snake,cub, brooklands school

You reviewed my story, so I thought I'd return the favour. I liked this. I stopped following Alex Rider a while back, as after Scorpia things went downhill in my opinion, but I very much found this to be an engaging and believable alternative that was certainly well executed.

Fantastic Story!

Your description of Alex (and his changes) is matching and very credible.

Id love to read more from you.

(Especially about Alex)