lol xaldin's part made me ROFL...

short,sweet, xaldin right on!

Hahahah, very cute and amusing! D

SH: that was hilarious. I loved the way you made the characters actually give answers that reflected a combination of their mood an personality. Xaldin's answer was quite comedic. i didn't see any grammar or spellign mistakes anywhere except for this one;

"his glinting with something Xigbar suddenly didn't want to find out"

I think you meant "His eyes glinting", but it is no matter, i understood it anyways. I am eager to read more of your works.

phew! you had me worried there.

anyways, nicely done! that was incredebly cute. Demyx is such and air-head, but he's sweet heart and you did a great job of showing that.

i loved it, keep writting!

Haha, awesome. XD Specially everyone's reactions to Xig's question. Xaldin's, most of all, was hilarious!

aww, cute!

'Ello there! 'Tis Charisma! XD

I came! I saw! And I read-ed! And- Ziggy-kun, I loved it! _ And I shall go about the rest of my days, being happy- for it exists! I laughed so hard, like 'zees: XD!

Domo arigatou gozaimasu! I feel so grateful! *bows*

And, of course- Sexig-BAH! XD

I'm not really in to XigDem, but this was adorable!XD I kind of feel bad for Xiggy though.

Nice story. I'm working on one too. Check it out when you have time.