Interesting enough, but you failed to describe Hinata. Are we dealing with shippuden or before? What is she like in the suit? Shouldn't Venom be more of a voice in the back of the head that feeds on the adrenaline of the host, or perhaps by devouring the recently deceased? Or if Venom is as sentient as he appears to be, wouldn't he have memories of his past lives? Or if he never ran into spiderman and didn't have the memories from the event wouldn't it recognize Hinata as the host prime, and try to maximize her abilities without webbing and spider sense and whatnot?
Food for thought
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If you still need a hand here, I can lend it
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this is not chapter 5 it's chaåter 1

Eh could use some work, it's not all bad. So um is there gonna be any NaruHina in this?

Well this isn't too bad. Well I think for this path if anything, her feelings for Naruto have to be a strong determining factor on how she wants to act with this new found power.

Long wait, yes.

But worth it.

Great work.

Hidy hidy,

I still maintain that you had an interesting idea to start with, but your writing quality is still too poor for me to really enjoy the story. Not to mention the really small chapter lengths. In over a year, You've written only seven thousand words and have a massive number of typos. If you added more depth, that would actually help take care of that, too. Or went ahead and added the Naruto/Hinata fluff since this IS labeled as a Naruto/Hinata story. I don't really even remember seeing him around.

Paladeus

witch blade naruhina

i go with number 5 for hinata because i played the game and it very good.

I vote for number 6

Summons

Chocobo, Shiva, Ifrit, whatever thunder summon, doomtrain, bahamut, levathine (spelling is wrong, but I think you know who I mean), and the last one is whatever you want it to be.

Dress spheres

White Mage, Alchemist (no gun), Berserker, and either Warrior or Samurai.

If you choose this as the story I would TRY to help. I don't know what I could do but I would at least try.

All the choices look nice for Hinata.

Make Hinata a ninja assassin and let her kill a who get her and Naruto way.

don't know much about bad guys i'm sorry but i love this story! especially the last chapter _ i love summons i don't know how you'll continue this fic but i hope you will soon

nice ideas, i hope you make more than one chapter about them though, don't care which

all 3 are good but in my own opinion use the one with the venom suit it could have hinata use the anger that she never could grasp