YOU CANT JUST LEAVE IT LIKE THIS! I have been completely absorbed into this story since I found it and now there isnt anything left...

this is THE best IbikiOC I have ever seen because they are so hard to come across and because usually they write Ibiki OOC but I finally found this one that not only captures the interrogator perfectly in character but also explains things in understandable ways.

Honestly I'm desperate, please find it in your heart to pick this story up again.

I love this story, and how you wrote the characters. I was wondering if you could do a spin off with a kakashi/oc.

I keep coming back and rereading this story I really can not wait for there to be more. You are a phenomenal writer and this story is so addictive!

I love love love this! Your descriptions are amazing and I can't wait to see more

At this point, Im so hoping your not setting up badass ibiki with a clumsy civilian. There was humor and "maybe that could work" with the landlady. Then you introduced the walking disaster that is whimpering on the roof, and all I could do is sigh in how quickly this got cliche and annoying. But I will give you this, you have a good writing style, easy to read.

I'm so, so, very torn.

On the one hand, I love what you've built between Ayumu and Ibiki and how things are developing and growing. But... but... Kakashi! Why?!

I fully admit to a massive bias where he is concerned. Please, please, please don't kill him! He's my absolute favourite character and I'm so torn between being upset at him for his actions towards Ayumu and upset for him for how circumstances are playing out...

Please?

Lurker

This is my first time ever reading an IbikixOc fanfic especially when theres not many written. But my goodness, I am in love with this story. There's a certain way that you have written this that I can't get my head wrapped around the way you describe Ibiki's feelings and actions feels so spot on, it gives me chills just thinking about it.
Plus I normally always read kakashixoc romance stories and root for him, but I think this is the first time I hate him lol. I don't know I just want Kakashi to back off and see his own actions. Or better yet have Ayu stand up and tell him that she loves Ibiki and only him. And I know Ayu is sort of wary of Tsunade but in my opinion she should let her know what Kakashi is doing and doesn't feel safe.
Seriously idk, I just want her to have a happy marriage with Ibiki and all those daughters his cursed with.
I really really love this fic. I hope you update soon!

I decided to say fuck it and check on this story at 2am after at least a year of not looking at it and god, I can’t tell you how happy I am to see an update. I’ve read this doc at least 3 times in full! I wish there were more Ibiki fics but only if they portrayed him as amazingly as you do!

So i enjoy this fanfic greatly, the plot is great the characters arr great i do feel you are doing the Naruto characters justice. But I cant help but feel theyre relationship isn't very equal or honestly
Healthy at certain points.
A sub in a standard S&M relationship typically has all the power, they have the ability to say 'No' and that doesnt just equate to sex... but in life as well.
But here ibiki has ALL of the power he is judge, jury, and executioner and only allows Ayumu control when HE wants it to be so. She does something wrong he is allowed to punish and correct such behavior, and Ayumu always forgives him wiyhin moments in my opinion, Ibiki allowed a perverse invasion of her privacy without her knowledge or agreement. Then when he was caught, he wasn't truly apologetic everytime Ayumu does what any woman would do when her man goes to far and does something. It is viewed by Ibiki and Kakashi as cute, glorious, and beautiful, not i made a mistake and need to do better. Ayumu is expected to better herself and trust ibiki 100% and submit ti him when she is wrong, but to Ibiki in my opinion doesnt respect Ayumu enough to actully listen to her when she is in the right.
Ibiki HEARS what Ayumu is saying but it really to me doesnt seem like he is actually LISTENING to what she, he comes across to me during these moments as patronizing.
Ibiki doesn't listen to what Ayumu is saying because she hasnt actully punished him when he is in the wrong, she forgives him almost immediately after he has done some fast talking.
I love your OC Ayumu she speaks to all women i feel in various ways, whether physically, mentally, or emotionally, i feel anyone reading this fic can relate to her.
I love your fic pleade keep updating.
With love
Amber

Omg so happy to see an update. Excellent chapter!

IM SO GLAD YOU UPDATED. I READ THE CHAPTER SUPER FAST AND NOW IM OFF TO REREAD THIS STORY CAUSE I ADORE AYUMI AND IBIKI GREAT UPDATE AND HOPEFULLY YOU CAN UPDATE SOON!

btw you have me so confused about Gai! whats he after, whats his angle?! and im guessing its kakashi that helps her at the end of the chapter?

Ugh, yes finally!

i missed this story! i LOVE it sooooo much and am so excited that you updated! another amazing chapter as usual. keep up the awesome work!

I can honestly say that this has been THE BEST thing I have ever read. Your writing style is both intelligent and enthralling. I’ve been so captivated in this story that I let out a real genuine wail of despair when I came to the last page and am sincerely heartbroken that there isn’t more to read.