Oh my god...jesus! WTF?! Dayum, now I have to read something pleasant otherwise I will not sleep tonight O_O

That was... very cold...and dark...and sad... and just lots of negative emotions. It was beautiful in a very morbid way. Wowwww... it's a good thing you maintain a nice ratio between romance and tragedy because DAYUM!

I can't imagine a gun killing Yami tho. I always imagined bullets would bounce off him and he could just stick his hand out and obliterate a mofo. MIND CRUSH! LOL

Oh my gosh...Its so sad yet sweet. *sniffs* BRAVO! Beautiful.

OMG! This is a so beautifully written..

That was sad and cute at the end. Please write a happy one-shot with me and you in it

Very sweet and very sad. Poor Yugi and Atemu.