i liked this. it was very good. im gonna go check out your page see if you have anymore stories for me to enjoy

This is EXCELLENT
I LOVE it
I wish Clare had written something like this

That was amazing. Thank you for writing something romantic without all that gross "lemon" stuff.

i like this a lot :)

I like this rendition of the talk in Taki's much better than the original. Then again, she was going for another book out of it before it was resolved. You wrote this quite well. It was descriptive, and the characters seemed natural, the conversation flowed well, and I hope you write more.

Good!

this is how it should have ended...book 2

this was really good!

nice

Who's the lady? D: It's so good I couldn't stop reading!

I liked it. Can you extend it though? More than a one-shot.

Nice :)

this was exactly like what i wanted to happen at taki's with jace and clary not exactly but close to it keep onwith your writing you'll be a great writer in the future.

love it although i kinda think that if clary had come clean then some things in CoG would never have happened and it wouldn't have ended on a cliff hanger that makes you need the next book like water/food/air

OMG! I love it so much! It is very well written with very few grammar/spelling mistakes, if any at all. The author's note at the beginning of the story was so cute! This is like the ultimate ending! Although I have not read City of Ashes, I really like this ending! I have fallen hard and fast for this Mortal Instruments pairing! I was so mad when I found out they were 'related'. But, I was happy when I learned what was really going on. Extremely amazingly awesome! Good job. :-)

Love always,

Ally