D'aw's all around my friend. This was well written, adorable, and great to read, especially when it's as cold as it is.

This is my favorite ROD story, without a doubt. It's written so well, and I love all of the little descriptions you have in here.

Oh...I didn't want this to end ;; It seemed long, but it flew by so fast!

Awesome job with this 3

X3 Lovely story. I really thought it was well written and you captured all their quirks and personalities nicely. Thank you for the great read!

Though good, I do have a few criticisms. One: about the spacing... though in a book, a long block of text is fine, on a computer screen with small print, it is very jarring. Most people's eyes will take in the ending or the beginning of a paragraph more than the middle since their eyes are naturally drawn there. A huge block of text can also be intimidating, so try to limit a paragraph to five lines at a time. Though a paragraph break may not be necessary, it sure s a break to the reader's eyes.

Second: the ending... the sudden love confessions really aren’t realistic. Though the part of Nenene's pushing of Maggie was a bit OOC and the dialogue was unrealistic, it was bearable. I believe that Maggie wouldn't be unable to just come out and say such a bold statement, even less likely that she would blow it off so easily.

Though most of this seems negative, there are parts I definitely enjoyed. The use of the constant attempts at defining sensual were good as was Michelle's character.

Work on spacing, dialogue, and being in character some more: with a good plot idea like this one and the nice style you have, you could become a very good writer.

The story seems great so far, the characters are in character, and I liked the flow of the story. I can't wait for the next chapter to come out because the story is so laid back and relaxing to read. Thank you for starting it.

Yay! Oh the adorableness! However i thought it probably wasn't needed for Maggie and Nenene to tell each other that they loved each other, surely a look would have been enough, knowing how un-talkative Maggie is. Anyway, i look forward to any more Maggie/Nenene fic of yours. You're an excellent writer

... You have NO IDEA how happy this fic made me! And here I was, looking for new Nenene/Maggie fics, and stumbling upon this goldmine was astounding. You MUST write more fics about these two! They're in an awful shortage! T_T I enjoyed this so much- the plot was beautiful and everyone was incharacter. Great work, and keep writin'! Jaa!

~Shadow Neko

Wow, this is one of those remarkably few Nenene-Maggie stories that takes almost every factor that makes their relationship endearing and ties it all together in a touching yet-completely-plausible little romance. In fact, this is so rare that I believe you are only the second person to accomplish it. The astounding attention to character that is found in all the dialog and descriptions and the humor and quirkiness perfectly reminded me of the great Maggie-Nenene stories that brought me to this couple in the first place.

I'm too tired to mention every thing about this story that was great so I will just keep this brief and say only this: Write more :P

Oh, this is gorgeous! The whole thing is wonderful, but my three favourite bits are the bit about Maggie's hands, the little poke at all the unlikely things that people in romantic stories tend to smell of (I'm extremely guilty of this, which only makes it funnier and sweeter), and Michelle objecting to Maggie hogging all the Nenene-hugs. So awesome. XD

Deliciously, adorable. The dialogue was priceless. I adored the exchanges between Maggie and Nenene. Just a really nice piece of work. It especially filled my craving for R.O.D when I had lent my DVDs out. Thanks for the pleasure