Reviews for Lullaby
Guest chapter 1 . 7/6/2016
Is the picture peter and Olivia from fringe
prankgurl chapter 22 . 3/1/2016
It was an amazing journey with you! I will say I am subconsciously discriminative because I was taken aback when I realized that you are a male. Rhisbwass too emotional to be coming from the standard males I have seen. You must be too perceptive to have felt all those emotions that you have described so accurately. I hope your kids are alright and are proud of having you as a dad. It has become more of a review of your real achievement as a father and a person rather than a fan fiction bit I guess if that's the way it is, you surely wouldn't mind. At least I hope so. I am moving onto your other stories roght now so I think you can expect one other review from me.
Guest chapter 6 . 12/25/2013
old story i know and writing's good, but Peyton is so out of character.
BikerChick101 chapter 22 . 6/4/2013
This story made me tear up a few times, I really loved reading it :)
lornajoe chapter 22 . 3/6/2012
I just found this and loved it. I read it all in one day! You are a crazy awesome writer! I can't wait to check out your other stories!
mahsa chapter 22 . 6/6/2011
I got lost a little here and there... But it's a good story!
Anon this time chapter 8 . 12/28/2010
Well, now it's my proper review to THIS story. I know you finished it quite a while ago already, but I just began reading it (A couple of days ago) and I'm loving it so I really wanted to write down my opinion on it anyway.

For starters, I really got to tell how amazing your writing is. It's so impressive and so well done, that I'd actually felt as though I'm reading an actual book.

The way you carry the emotions they are feeling, how broken they are (BOTH of them) is really beautiful, and tragic, and in more ways than one, epic. i'm loving reading each chapter, and though it's sad, I loved the way they are there for each other so far.

I'm glad - I'm actually loving Peyton leans on Lucas now. She's hurting, and so is he, but they are still each other rocks, and I think that's one of the things I love the most about this story.

Hmm...Sometimes however I do not agree with you in the way they talk with each other. I mean, like sometimes when Lucas calls Peyton "baby" or "sweetheart" or things like that. I think it's sweet, but when I read those parts I somehow don't see actual Lucas saying those words to Peyton that way. I don't know, that's how I feel, I hope it makes sense, and I hope you don't take that the wrong way. I guess it's because they are only 17 in the end, I'm not sure

But regardless, I'm loving reading this story and I wanted you to know that. It's odd the time I found a boy who writes as beautifully as you write fan-fiction so I'm lucky I found such talented writer. This story is epic, and probably one of my favorite despite sometimes they characters here feel a little ooc for me, but then again, the way you carry their pain and feelings overall tops all of it, so yeah, this story i so far. I'm looking forward to read more!
Anon again chapter 8 . 12/28/2010
feel free to erase my last review and this one too, sorry. I totally hit the bottom wrong, your review wasn't that one, ugh, i'm sorry! That happens when I'm reading and reviewing more than one story at the same time. Sorry
Anon chapter 8 . 12/28/2010
I'm SO glad they are getting the little girl back. It was really only the right thing to do! UPDATE SOON!
jcmcdo8 chapter 22 . 10/12/2010
You did an incredible job with story. I can't get over it. This story was amazing. So many emotions went through me when I read this. No other story has ever had such an effect on me. It is very close to my heart. Thank you for a great story.
wowza chapter 14 . 8/3/2010
this story is so tragically beautiful
leyton4everrr chapter 22 . 7/26/2010
this is one of the best-written stories on this site. its beautiful and tragic and my favourite.
aracely6 chapter 22 . 8/28/2009
thanks for writing it i loved it
xxcrimsonorchidxx chapter 22 . 8/24/2009
Amazing story! It was heart breaking and loving at the same time. Thank you for sharing.
A-shiningstar chapter 22 . 8/17/2009
Very nice epiloge. Was Sawyer, Brooke's daughter?

Congrats on having a book published! :)
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