Oh my! I wasn't expecting the stone butterfly to be what the White Witch had done. That was a nice little twist but sad. This whole piece is lovely and so sad! There's so many things I love. I'm glad I came across this again. )

Very good...how about a second one...where susan must go back and change it back?

That was great. Please write a second one about them going back to return the butterfly and maybe a romance between Caspian and Susan.

i hope you continue!

What a very sweet story! I loved the relationship between Susan and Caspian, it was so lovely. And I always did wonder what had happened to that butterfly the witch had turned to stone! And now Susan must go back, and she'll get to see Caspian ;)

aw kinda sad!

I have to say I rarely review, it's mostly out of laziness but this story was too good not to review it. It flowed very beautifully and was very well crafted. I enjoyed it a great deal, it truly was excellent. I'll have to keep an eye out for anything else you write because excellence like that isn't a fluke.

Is there a sequel to this?

I think this is a really sweet story. I can't wait to see the movie of Prince Caspian. TTFN!

are you going to keep writing?

Wonderful tale! Great job! I'm not a fan of S/C romance, but I think you did an awesome job keeping it at a low level! Definitely a fav! Blessings! ~Ila

glad someone else appreciates this pairing. i was watching the behind the scenes thing (on family channel {a canadian disney channel}) and just the look they gave one another in a scene was enough to suggest a slight attraction. but it won't go that far which sucks, cuz they have to return to england and Caspian prob wouldn't be able to go to because of his age and not knowing about any modern technology etc

anyway great story, hope you write another

Great little one shot! It truly brings to life how I felt that Susan would act both in the movie and the book. Well done!

WOW!

just..wow! that was good!

pleasant to read, well written. Not awfully mushy or graphic. Now this is an example that some su/caspian isn't so bad. SOME, I say ;) If done right, I enjoy reading about Narnian romance. And this was done quite well in my opinion.

Excellent! We need more fics like this.

That was beautiful. Not only because I am one of those beople who like the idea of the Susan/Caspian romance, but mostly because it was written so well! I'd give you 5 stars if we were on YouTube :D