Absolutely Wonderful! I laughed and cried, it was really great! Thank You!

Pretty cool lol. Makes me want to read more, how they all grow now that they're kind of.. In the know about things in terms of each other.

In the end, it was a good read and I loved it from start to finish! :)

The first part of the story had me confused but then I read the rest so I understood. That was a lot to take in, and I'm a bit confused, but so far this is what I know.

Leah and Jake had a kid... So he imprinted..? And he has a kid.. So he's a dad.

Bella somewhat absorbed Edward, Alice, and Jasper's abilities. Which is very cool by the way

And then I don't understand how she finally became a vampire (well an actual one with the craving for blood) after four years.

I didn't like this chapter, but only because of Charlie is in the ground. The wolves coming to pay their respects makes sense. Jake being at the wedding and Bella not knowing, I don't recall that in the first chapter, must've missed it. At least Jake accepts her.. Sort of.

Great chapter though, what with the flow and how things seems to play out.

Oh my goodness... Charlie :( He's probably my favorite character whenever he's mentioned, aside from the main characters... I love Charlie like how I love my own dad.. :/

I'm still wondering why Bella's so different from regular newborns. Maybe its because she desensitized herself around the Cullens? Well that's just a guess, I'm probably way off lol.

The first chapter leaves me wanting to read more. Can't wait to read the next chapter! (well right after I review this chapter lol) Wonderful read too :)

Awww! So sweet, sad & cute. But a beautiful retelling nonetheless!

What the hell? That was so amazingly bad ass! Bella having dark brown curls & eyes! And then her almost killing Jake makes up for Seth. But Leah makes me sad. And I would love to see a Bella/Emmett arm wrestling and Jas/Bella fight!

Wow. Very unique. I like this take, very creative & original. And the part where Bella gets injured makes it realistic (as much as ff will allow) and believable.

aw that was a really good ending

you have to love Emmett

yes true Jacob

did charlie die

love it

UM...OKAY..I'M HAPPENED