| Reviews for Brotherly Love |
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   StormTalon1997 chapter 28 . 6/6/2014 I really want to know more! Are you still writing it? If so, I'll look forward to it. Great story :D |
| AM chapter 28 . 5/2/2014 PLEASE UPDATE! I am begging you as a reader. This story is awesome you are a great writer GM, this story is proof. Anyways Happy writing and I hope you update soon! |
| AM chapter 22 . 5/2/2014 I have to say GM, I really like your conversations with the characters during and after the chapter. It is hilarious! |
| AM chapter 11 . 5/2/2014 Of course Phoenix is handsome. Piper is cute, and they are blood related! BTW good story so far. Now I have 16 chapters until the end current stopping point end of your story. Happy writings! |
| AM chapter 1 . 5/2/2014 BIRTHDAY! (the muppet's Animal cries) |
| Guest chapter 2 . 11/4/2013 Make more now |
| the-devil-cat 2.0 chapter 28 . 6/20/2013 I am BEGGING YOU, I WILL LITERALLY GET ON MY KNEES AND BEG YOU TO UPDATE! (Gets on knees) Renee: get off of your knees, GM is just a busy dude, Me: fine, please update because I love this story and it makes my happy when I read it -Me |
| the-devil-cat 2.0 chapter 1 . 4/12/2013 OMG so happy you updated I love this story update soon please |
| Lady Snowstorm chapter 28 . 3/26/2013 God damnit finn you're screwing everything up again, how could you...anyway been awhile good chapter |
| Guest chapter 27 . 3/25/2013 Where is the next chapter its been 2 months! |
| The universe chapter 27 . 2/26/2013 where is chapter 28 |
| Guest chapter 27 . 2/14/2013 write the next chapter now! |
| Guest chapter 27 . 2/2/2013 this is fab, please please carry on, thankyou also, slighlty a little bit in love with phoenix... :') x ok cool ahahhaahha please continue! x x x x |
| Anthony love chapter 27 . 1/29/2013 I have a idea you could have dark ace capture piper again and punish her. Then on the final chapter he forces piper to marry him but before MC is about to say 'you may whatever' arrow grabs dark aces blade and stabs dark aces mother and slicing dark ace in half killing them. Then they try to escape but MC and cinder pool and loads of talons (cycloneions) try to stop them but piper whacks MC out of the way and with dark aces blade in her hand beheads cinder pool and they all escape and live happily ever after. |
| DR BOB chapter 27 . 1/23/2013 please write chapter 28 and if you can chapter 29 by the 25th of january 2013 thank you. i like the story |
