I’ve come here 12 years later to tell you that this is a good fan fiction.

So, um, are you gonna update this ever? Please? Because this story is absolutely amazingly written and you shouldn’t abandon it! Seriously, love it so much!️

This is a refreshing approach on leo taking care of donnie:)

Powerful story.

This is beautiful. PLEASE UPDATE

Please update! This fic is stupendous!

This story though man...

Hi, i just know that i need to review this. There is only one thing that i could say about this fic. This fic is ABSOLUTELY BRILLIANT! The whole plot, characteristc, emotions are all beautifully potrayed here. This is one of the most bestest tmnt fanfic i've ever had the pleasure to read. You are such a wonderful and gifted writer..i would LOVE to read more of your fics. Kudos

I loved this story so much thanks for writing it!

You know your stuff when it comes to medical info and addiction. Impressive. It does feel like you were tackling the 'issue' of addiction while using the characters to deliver the message. in that respect it was good. From the characters point of view though, I do feel they were abit hard on donnie verbally . He never would have got addicted to asprin in the first place had he not been infected. And he wouldn't have become obsessed with fixing everything if he hadn't seen the future and what happened to his family without him. No wounder he flipped his lid. He just wanted to protect them, which bring me to ask why didn't donnie tell them about that later, just so they could understand what trauma he has been tackling? I think that could have even been a course. To much pressure. Not to mention the fact that they all did expect to much from him. Becoming an addict is so dangerously easy. They acted right getting rid of everything, am just saying, they were not very understanding. Some of that responsibility was there's. However, very good story. Definitely an issue that needs addressing more. Good work.

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I WONDER WHAT THE NOMBER WAS MUST BE A BIG NOMBER TO MAKE DONNIE CRY . THIS WAS AN AWESOME STORY !

Hi, I'm Grubus on tumblr and Gemi on ao3. I dunno if you're still active, but I would like to ask if I can continue this story? I would probably rewrite a bit too since your wonderful writing style is so different from my own and I wouldn't want it to clash, but either way I would totally put up a link to this story and make sure everyone knows you are the mastermind behind it! I can't promise I will ACTUALLY work on it, but I just really love this idea and I guess I would want to figure out myself how Don eventually tells the family of SAINW and so on :3
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NOOOOOOOOOO! WHY HIATUS WHY?! This story is beautiful and no one can tackle it like you! It's amazing and I have loved every second of it, it's so realistic and you are such an excellent writer and you capture the characters so well! I am so saddened that you never finished and don't plan to. Unfinished fics are like a knife to my heart! Especially when they are so brilliant as this!

YOu know, this is a really good read. Makes me want to tackle the subject, well, Kinda. I really want to write something like this. The only problem for me is that I just can't quite believe the whole Asprin is an addictive drug thing. I mean, I'm sure statistically, it COULD happen. And that It can really mess up teens who take it for sertain infectious illnesses. But still, it created something so that I could not be as into the story as I wanted to be. Otherwise, it's an excellent read, and I want to see what happens next. Please keep writing, this is good stuff!